Penn16
Penn16,
UPenn
B.S., Finance, , Business Management
Penn, Wharton School 2016 studying finance and management.
Features Included
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Essays
6
Schools
10
Scores
1
Advice
5
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Freehold
GenderMale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision
Class of2016
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken English

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • Columbia University (New York, NY)
  • New York University (New York, NY)
  • Princeton University (Princeton, NJ)
  • Villanova University (Villanova, PA)
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)

Applied for a B.S. in Finance

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Both Parents

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
39 Words
One moment that changed you
I talked about a terrifying moment that I had while leading a summer camp group with 45 campers. One camper got seriously injured, and it was up to me to manage the situation and keep everyone safe and under control.
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General Admissions Advice

Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred
722 Words
Being deferred from your first choice school can be devastating. On top of that, there are almost no definitive resources on how to proceed from there. Almost all schools say that once you are deferred, they do not want you to send in additional materials. However, when you are deferred, you are going to be analyzed against the entirety of the regular decision pool (even though, looking at numbers, it seems as if schools admit a constant percentage of deferred students year over year). You must set yourself apart and continue to show interest. In my case, I applied to...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.20
 
Rank
Top 1%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1570
on 1600 scale
Highest SAT
2320
 
SAT Score Details
 
Original SAT Score2320
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details7 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesDrama Production Crew, Student Council / Government, Quiz Bowl/Academic Bowl, National Honor Society, Science Club/Team
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials

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