gobigred288,
Cornell
B.S., Biology
I am a Syrian first-generation college student attending Cornell University!
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Background
Hometown
Rocklin, United Arab Emirates
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2018
First Gen College StudentNo
English First Language
No
Other Language(s) Spoken
Arabic
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Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Cornell University (Ithaca, NY)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
School Specific Advice
How I chose schools to apply to114 WordsI definitely recommend applying to at least 10 schools. If you need fee waivers, talk to your career counselor or look into the Questbridge scholars program. I was able to get all of my common...Read more...More Essays
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I’m not even an inch in, but the pungent smell of it already fills my nostrils like a waterfall, acting upon my body as if it were a substance more potent than the hardest drug. I can already feel myself immersing into an alternate reality, with my awareness starting to slip. Pushing the white door wide open, I enter my mother’s closet. I am constantly amazed by the effect this place has on me. I have been here...Read more...Supplemental Essay Diversity statement694 WordsMy heart is racing. My head is pounding. My palms are sweating. This cannot be happening to me. Rewind to a typical day in the life of [my name], and my primary concern would be to ace my exams for that day. Little did I know that those worries could never compare to the hurt and confusion I felt on December 2, 2010. In the morning of a seemingly normal day, four police officers presented themselves to my family and in six...Read more...Supplemental Essay Strong beliefs/principles244 WordsA pencil and a piece of paper matter to me. These two overused and under-appreciated supplies are the basis for my favorite characteristic- creativity. From poetry to paper airplanes, love letters to tic-tac-toe, and scratch work to sketching, a pencil and a piece of paper allow an individual to temporarily become an artist. Not an artist in art itself, but an artist in ideas. The endless possibilities of thoughts and doodles can transform into a brilliant epiphany. Einstein probably jotted...Read more...Additional Essay Details68 WordsMy essays were very personal, and you do not need a "sob-story" similar to mine to wow the admissions committee. You can literally talk about the time you failed your swim competition, or the time you visited an Art Museum. That was how my first essay was, it was about a simple time that I entered my Mom's closet, and then I related those emotions to my future.Read more...General Admissions Advice
Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received42 WordsNo, it wasn't necessary as long as you were organized and set goals...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience64 WordsI interviewed to about 10 schools, most from the Ivy League. In all honesty, interviews are given to students if...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice45 WordsThe big scholarships online are, in my opinion, a waste of time. It is...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to76 WordsMy mindset was, if I apply to a bunch of schools, I'm bound to get into a couple of really good ones. I...Read more...How to increase chances at my school45 WordsI don't recommend doing this to every college, but maybe in March send your...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college80 WordsI definitely recommend a few summer activities because I know some colleges asked for how you spent your summer, and you don't want to...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders65 WordsYou don't want to choose a teacher that is clearly bad at writing, but you also don't want to just...Read more...Post-college plans30 WordsI am hoping to work for a few years...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture189 WordsCornell University is located in Ithaca, New York. It is absolutely beautiful and the campus was prettier than any other campus I visited, including Harvard and Princeton (sorry). It looks like Hogwarts, and has tall buildings that are incorporated with Gothic culture. I like how, while Cornell maintains its ivy league status, it is a humble school...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants166 WordsWhen applying to the ivy league, the typical application holds a 2200 on their SAT. That wasn't the case with me. My SAT and ACT scores were not that high when compared to my peers. For the UC's, I got in early to CAL, UCLA, UCSB, and UCD as a regents...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school61 WordsHmm...the "Why Us" essay topics were always the hardest for me. I just wanted to scream out ...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.50RankTop 1%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades
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Highest ACT31ACT Score Details
Highest SAT1420on 1600 scaleHighest SAT2020SAT Score Details
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AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details8 classes and scoresSports
SportsTennis, Track & Field
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ActivitiesCharity Drive Organizing, Yearbook, National Honor Society, Student Council / Government
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