lovewharton123,
UPenn
B.B.A., Banking and Finance, , Accounting, , Business Administration and Management, , Business Management, , Economics, , Economic Development, , Entrepreneurship, , Finance, , Finance and Accounting, , International Business
Freshman at Wharton, UPenn with a passion for finance and public policy!
Features Included
3
Essays
1
Schools
8
Scores
9
Advice
11
ECs
2
Sports
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
More Essays
These essays haven't been tagged by school. Click school logos above to see tagged essays.
Personal Statement
573 Words
Career aspirations,
Challenged a belief,
Controversial topic,
Creative personal story,
Diversity statement,
Ethical dilemma,
Feeling out of place,
Interest in other academic subject,
International background,
Issue of personal significance,
Leadership experience,
One moment that changed you,
Overcoming personal struggle,
Reaching a goal,
Role model/inspiration,
Story central to identity,
Volunteer/public interest work
Here I am again, standing in front of an audience, representing ON ACT, an organization I founded to raise awareness about human trafficking in Peru. Before speaking, I wait until a total silence has fallen upon the room, until I am certain I have their undivided attention. “Hello, we are ON ACT and the reason we are here is to speak about modern slavery.” The faces of the 300 girls in front of me go blank… and I’m not surprised,...
Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
634 Words
Guadalupe is a girl that lives nearby La Pampa, Madre de Dios. Both of her parents work in the harsh conditions of illegal mining sites. Like many other girls, it is likely she will never finish school and due to the lack of opportunities, she will probably remain poor her whole life. However, all the inhabitants in the area see trucks exporting the product of illegal mining everyday, and they wonder why, despite the richness of the forests are they...
Additional Essay Details
48 Words
The Admissions Committee would like to learn why you are a good fit for your undergraduate school choice (The Wharton School). Please tell us about specific academic, service, and/or research opportunities at the University of Pennsylvania that resonate with your background, interests, and goals. (400-650 words) working
General Admissions Advice
What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school
13 Words
Look at the "Undergraduate...
My advice about getting recommenders
50 Words
Get teachers who know you well not only in class but also about your person,...
Why I ultimately chose my school
75 Words
UPenn is not only ranked as the top university to study business, but it is also a place where you can make your...
How I chose schools to apply to
59 Words
I first looked at the top ranked schools and chose from that shorter list. Then I went to...
Recommended summer activities during high school and college
42 Words
Travel and go see the world. Learn from different cultures and people. If...
What I like about my school’s location and culture
32 Words
It is a urban site. There are so many stores...
How to increase chances at my school
78 Words
Do a lot of volunteer and social work. They take it a lot into account.
Be honest in your essays and really open...
What set me apart from other applicants
4 Words
My ...
Post-college plans
16 Words
Work in investment banking for...
High School Performance
GPA
3.70
(no specification of weighting) Rank
Top 25%
Academic Performance in High School Low one semester/year
Explanation of Low Grades
Test Scores
Highest ACT
31
ACT Score Details
Highest SAT
1360
on 1600 scale
Highest SAT
1920
SAT Score Details
SAT Prep
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details6 classes and scores
Sports
SportsTrack & Field, Volleyball
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesClean Ocean Beach Sweeps / River Cleanup, Community Cleanup / Service, Debate Club/Team, Help Save Our Environment, Hospital Volunteer, Model Congress / Model UN, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Nursing Home Volunteer, Volunteer Coach, Tutoring/Mentoring, Student Council / Government
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work
Experience & Awards
How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received