LESMAR16,
Amherst
B.A., Biology
Someone who never believed an elite school would accept her until now.
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Essays
10
Schools
10
Scores
10
Advice
4
ECs
1
Sports
Background
Hometown
New Brunswick, New Jersey
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision
Class of2020
First Gen College StudentYes
English First Language
No
Other Language(s) Spoken
Spanish
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Amherst College (Amherst, MA)
Applied for a B.A. in Biology
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Personal Statement798 WordsCareer aspirations, Overcoming personal struggle, Interest in med/sci/math, Family member’s disability, Feeling out of placeThe lessons I have learned in tennis can apply to everybody’s life. When someone begins learning tennis, the main focus is to keep the ball in play. Keep the ball going back and forth until you win the point. I honestly struggled keeping up my motivation in high school. However once I finally found a very steady source, it made life much easier and it kept me going much longer. I lived in Missouri until I moved to New...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school504 WordsLosing one parent can make life extremely difficult. At the time I lost my father for the first time, I was at the age of twelve. He was in jail because he made a terrible, selfish decision so I felt little sympathy for him and no effects from his one month absence. In addition, the rest of my family was in good health and in a good financial situation including secure transportation. However, the second time he was arrested, not...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school675 WordsAs I began dissecting the cow’s oddly enormous eyeball for my fifth grade science club, I felt a new interest in science developing. I remember the various questions it raised in my mind that ranged from “Why is the eyeball larger than it appears on a live cow?” to “What is this dark, slimy liquid?”. My curiosity in the biological aspect of science was sparked. Science class had always been my favorite class in elementary school and still remains...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay243 WordsThe University of Chicago is where someone like me, an eccentric, curious person with various passions, can find people to identify with. I want to find a school that has a community that is like that. A recruiter came to my school and spoke to us about how there is a Chipotle appreciation club, a circus and how there was a time students built a nuclear reactor. There is pretty much everything at this school. I do not have a...Read more...Additional Essay Details98 WordsThe first essay was used for Questbridge, which asked to describe an experience which caused you to change your perspective and/or your opinion. How did this affect you? The second essay was for Rutgers which asked: Rutgers requires that you provide a short essay that is your original work. Please reflect on what you consider to be an important personal experience related to your talents, interests, or commitments. Using this experience, please tell us what you learned about yourself....Read more...General Admissions Advice
What I’d change about my application process82 WordsI would have started much earlier. I procrastinated at the end, which made have hurt some of my supplemental essays. I also would have finished...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience172 WordsI interviewed for University of Chicago and Princeton. UChicago is probably one of the weirdest ones to interview, but it also really helps them see if you're the student they would want and if the school is one you would want. For me, I fell in love with UChicago way more after...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders60 WordsFor one, ask your recommenders early for a recommendation! Also, ask your junior teachers that you feel genuinely...Read more...How to increase chances at my school67 WordsWhen writing your essays, try to incorporate how characteristics that really shows that you'd be someone that would fit into...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college142 WordsDuring the summer, the best thing you can do is advance on one of your passions (or multiple if you adventurous), but make sure it's meaningful. Don't do things you know you really couldn't care less about if it wasn't for college. I...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants67 WordsA few things I think set me apart. For one, I'm someone who has overcame huge obstacles and was still...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice94 WordsApply to scholarships early!! I mostly worried about the Questbridge Match Scholarship (which I ultimately did win), but some of the great scholarship like Horatio Alger, Coke and...Read more...Post-college plans30 WordsMost likely, I'm going to medical school to eventually...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to167 WordsSo I decided to three safeties because I knew TCNJ would be a school that might not offer too much aid, but I could easily be accepted to and possible get outside scholarships. Rutgers was known for good aid to good students and getting into the honors college would be...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school26 WordsI ultimately chose to attend because I was...Read more...High School Performance
GPA3.84(no specification of weighting)RankTop 5%
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
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Highest ACT29ACT Score DetailsOther ACT ScoresACT Prep
Highest SAT1480on 1600 scaleHighest SAT2120SAT Score Details
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Details5 classes and scoresSports
SportsTennis
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Activities4-H, Hospital Volunteer, Library Volunteer, Tutoring/Mentoring
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