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Class of2021
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
Applied for a B.S. in Finance
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Personal Statement673 WordsCareer aspirations, Creative personal story, Extracurricular passion, Interest in other academic subject, Issue of personal significance, Volunteer/public interest workAt the ripe old age of eleven, I found my first love. It wasn’t your traditional boy meets girl type of relationship, but rather more of an unorthodox attraction that remains instilled in me today. My father introduced me to her, the world I profoundly adore now, the world of investing. After formalities were over, I was allowed to make my first investment. I chose GameStop. At the time, my amateur reasoning-a point where I wasn’t thinking about...Read more...Personal Statement358 WordsCareer aspirations, Creative personal story, Extracurricular passion, Interest in other academic subject, One moment that changed you, Role model/inspirationTabula rasa, a term coined by John Locke meaning “blank slate” or to me, the perfect way to describe how I began investing. My venture began one morning as I shuffled across the shaggy carpet lining of my parent’s bedroom over to my father’s laptop. Out of curiosity, I peered over his shoulder to see a magnificent display of red, green, and black that still never ceases to amaze me. I asked him what the protruding symbols and...Read more...Personal Statement337 WordsCareer aspirations, Challenged a belief, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Story central to identityOver half of Americans have zero dollars in the stock market. To me, that fact was outright appalling. Never had I imagined almost every other person in my beloved country was either too afraid or lacked the knowledge to apply such a necessary skill. Even I, a lowly adolescent, has the ability to invest what little income I possess and make it grow to amounts far beyond my ability to generate from a job. It was because of this lack...Read more...Personal Statement318 WordsAcademic achievement, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, Overcoming personal struggle, Reaching a goal, Role model/inspirationWhen asked what subject kids hate the most, the majority of students will say math. However, for me I’m the exact opposite. From the very moment I began school, math has always had a special hold on me. There’s something about wrapping your head around a problem, trying out different ideas, and finally coming up with a solution that makes math so enticing. I just love the sensation that takes over me when I’m trapped in thought,...Read more...Personal Statement306 WordsIssue of personal significance, Reaching a goal, Role model/inspiration, Story central to identity, Study/travel abroad, Volunteer/public interest workOver a million people in the United States alone are named Kevin. Clearly, my name is not unique. However, just like how every one of these other “Kevins” has a distinct fingerprint, I have a disparate personality. I yearn to help others, out of compassion, empathy, and the warm fuzzy feeling you get inside when you know you’ve made a difference in someone else’s life. Whether it be from giving a few dollars to someone less fortunate on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay678 WordsAs a kid, I would spend my recesses wandering aimlessly in the yard, attempting to sell pieces of candy my mother had bought in bulk for a modest profit. However, as I matured, I outgrew my adolescent practices and followed my father’s shoes by moving on to pouring my money into the stock market. I started out fragile and naive, but was able to grow from years of research and dedication to a trader capable of making it on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay512 WordsAs a kid, I would spend my recesses wandering aimlessly in the yard, attempting to sell pieces of candy my mother had bought in bulk for a modest profit. However, as I matured I outgrew my adolescent practices and followed my father’s shoes by moving on to pouring my money into the stock market. I started out fragile and naive, but was able to grow from years of research and dedication to a trader capable of making it on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay512 WordsAs an avid options trader, I’ve spent my days lost in thought, constantly devising new strategies to make money from the market and attempting to understand the mechanisms that influence its change. No matter what I do, the dynamics of trading constantly change, requiring me to keep on edge, never ceasing to end my contemplation. What I seek is a way to understand and to develop my way of thinking which I hope to do at the University of...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school436 WordsSquare one, the oh so hated beginning, the start of your journey, the first piece of the puzzle. In reality, there are multiple square ones, but in practicality, I only have one square one. I consider it to be the very second I embarked on my venture. My voyage began almost 8 years ago, but the fact is, it hasn’t even gone near completion yet. It all started with a piece of paper. Not just any ordinary piece of paper,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school275 WordsOn the outskirts of San Francisco, near Ocean Beach, is where my second home lies. I’ve spent countless hours there, training, improving, and defining who I am. I discovered this place at the age of 8, approximately eight years ago and ever since that day, I’ve redefined my life. Sitting complacently on the corner of Balboa and 41st lies a small beige building, the door remains creaky, the curtains are nearly always drawn, and the place itself conforms with...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school18 WordsHave pre-professional experience, career focused...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to70 WordsKnowing I wanted to head into finance, my priority pick was Wharton, but since it was an early application that allowed...Read more...More Essays
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What set me apart from other applicants44 WordsComing from an Asian background, I differentiated myself by finding my "hook". In...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders13 WordsMake connections with teacher's...Read more...Post-college plans8 WordsHeading into...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received85 WordsAdmissions counselors will all give you the same advice. Trust me, I've consulted with multiple ones during my application process. All of them will tell you...Read more...High School Performance
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