DKLW,
Dartmouth
B.S., Biology
I'm a first-generation Asian-American, but not a first-generation college attendee. I am an incoming freshman at Dartmouth College.
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7
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12
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9
Advice
8
ECs
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Sports
Background
Hometown
Sherborn, Massachusetts
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2020
First Gen College StudentYes
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Mandarin
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
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Personal Statement581 WordsVolunteer/public interest work, Summer experience, Overcoming personal struggleThis past summer I participated in the Assisting Individuals with Disadvantages (AID) Summer program which provides English lessons to disadvantaged children in Taiwan. The first week was a crash course not only in how to develop a curriculum, but also in how to bridge the cultural and socioeconomic gap between us and our students. When the time came to choose classes, my partner and I told each other, “We like challenges,” as we confidently and naively volunteered to take on...Read more...Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance819 WordsIn English class of junior year, we read “The Loss of the Creature,” by Walker Percy. In his essay, Percy discusses how every traveler “will only be conscious of the disparity between what it is and what it is supposed to be [or]… the measuring up of the thing to the criterion of the preformed symbolic complex” (Percy 566). Our journey will always occur in the context of our expectations. The more I thought about this, the more I realized that...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school283 WordsS a family friend who passed away recently, is my first choice partner for a tutorial. Since I rarely see my extended family, S was my stand-in aunt; her home was even the venue of my first “real” Thanksgiving. S never minced words. While many found her blunt, I appreciated her insistence on truthfulness. She was never afraid to let my mom know that yes, fashion has evolved since the eighties, or to ask me if I had gotten a...Read more...Supplemental Essay Other77 WordsThis is the full essay from which I excerpted essays that I sent to the school I eventually got into, but I did not get into Harvard (this was the supplemental optional essay I submitted to Harvard). I started working on my essays pretty late, so I did not have as much time to edit them. Additionally, my older siblings and teachers at my school helped me make extensive edits and helped with brainstorming quite a bit.Read more...General Admissions Advice
What I’d change about my application process58 WordsI would have started much earlier and approached the process with much less stress. Sometimes, I think...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience154 WordsI interviewed with 4 of the 7 schools I applied to. Two of my interviews (Harvard, MIT) went pretty badly and that's mostly because I was stressed out (they were my top two choices) and did not prepare well and did not act the way that I usually...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received55 WordsI did not use one, but many of my friends did. The private counselors seemed to be...Read more...Most popular extracurricular activities at my college2 WordsGreek...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college90 WordsDo not waste your summers!! If you are not working and saving money for college, then at least try to do some volunteering or go to some...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred191 WordsI was waitlisted/deferred at two schools, both of which I was ultimately denied from. For one my schools, I submitted some more awards that I did not list on my application awards section. In retrospect, I do not think that this was a very good idea as these awards were all awards from my school (i...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders46 WordsAsk early, be polite, be responsive and communicate clearly. Make sure you ask people...Read more...Why I declined other schools87 WordsA large part of my decision was financially based; however, if a school's financial package is not good enough or enough for you, I believe that...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school18 WordsGood reputation, best financial aid...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.50RankTop 10%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades
Test Scores
Highest SAT1540on 1600 scaleHighest SAT2260SAT Score Details
Other SAT ScoresSAT Prep
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AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details8 classes and scoresSports
SportsCross Country, Track & Field
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesAsian Club / Asian Interactive Youth Association, Debate Club/Team, World/Global Affairs Club, Book Buddies, Tutoring/Mentoring, Library Volunteer, Philosophy Club, National Honor Society
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How Spent Summers
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