emily896322,
UMich
B.S., Biology
A curious student who loves the sciences, health, and medicine and helping people!
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GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2021
First Gen College StudentNo
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University of Michigan - Ann Arbor (Ann Arbor, MI)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement628 WordsCareer aspirations, Creative personal story, Embarrassing mistake, Failure experience, Feeling out of place, Interest in med/sci/math, Leadership experience, Story central to identity, Summer experience, Work experiencePieces of shredded pork burst out of a gaping hole. The woman gawked at me from the other side of the counter. How could she expect me to wrap over two scoops of three-cheese queso and shredded pork without at least half of the filling squirting out? “I’m new,” I stuttered for the fiftieth time that day. It was my third week on the job at Qdoba Mexican Grill, and my lumpy, soggy burritos were a daily humiliation. I...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement336 WordsEssay #1 (Required for all applicants. Approximately 250 words) Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by (among other things) shared geography, religion, ethnicity, income, cuisine, interest, race, ideology, or intellectual heritage. Choose one of the communities to which you belong, and describe that community and your place within it. “Do you ever brush your hair?” My Chinese stand mate sneered at me after playing “Hot Cross Buns” in sixth grade. Exasperated, I replied yes. People always ask what...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school174 WordsIf you could only do one of the activities you have listed in the Activities section of your Common Application, which one would you keep doing? Why? (Required for all applicants. Approximately 100 words) The moment I put my mouth on my clarinet reed, I blow out my stresses of the day. The upbeat music beats with my heart and calms me. The raw emotion the music draws out of me and the opportunity to be in tune with others makes...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay508 WordsWhile reading a case study from my Anatomy textbook, I wondered how a boy could collapse after eating a banana. Reading on, I discovered he was missing an enzyme that digests potassium. Diseases and medical policy fascinate me; my goal is to become a pathologist who serves diverse communities around the world through diagnosing, treating, and preventing diseases. The College of Literature, Science, and the Arts (LSA) will provide me with a unique, multidisciplinary education that will give me global...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school58 WordsMake sure you really show your interest in the Why Michigan essay especially if you are out-of-state....Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience62 WordsThe interviews are casual conversations with alumni. Just be prepared for tell me about yourself, extracurricular activities, why this...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school31 WordsUmich is an extremely well-rounded school, and the in-state...Read more...Why I declined other schools25 WordsThe schools that were as prestigious as Michigan...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
My advice about getting recommenders22 WordsDefinitely participate in class and make sure...Read more...Post-college plans82 WordsDon't focus too much on your major or career because people do change their mind! For example, I applied to a couple direct med programs...Read more...What I’d change about my application process159 WordsI would definitely research more what schools I want to apply to. I ended up applying to 25 schools, many which I didn't really want to go to like MIT (my parents wanted me to apply since I'm a girl) and UC Santa Barbara, Davis, and Irvine since I...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college74 WordsMake sure to spend a lot of time in doing what you love! Find an internship, do research, or just working can...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants20 WordsI had a unique personal statement...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice137 WordsI actually purchased a scholarship learning system junior year but never really had time to use it and apply for scholarships. I did apply to a couple scholarships during college app season like Coca Cola Scholars, Niche, and Burger King, but...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received41 WordsI did not use a private admissions counselor but something called POWT...Read more...High School Performance
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