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Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)
Applied for a B.A. in Undecided
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Personal Statement667 WordsArt/acting/singing, Bizarre talent, Childhood memory, Leadership experience, Place you’re contentString Theory “The universe is infinitely large, perpetually growing, and is comprised of…” I reread the line. “What!?” I thought to myself. “Strings?” That can’t be right. Fantasy, non-fiction, mystery: they were no match for my unquenchable literary thirst. But an advanced science textbook (let alone one about Quantum Physics), well, that was new territory entirely. Attempting to link the abstract with the tangible, I connected String Theory (an impossibly complex approach to quantifying the universe), with my life ...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay173 WordsOh, The Places You'll Go is one of the most popular books by ''Dr. Seuss'' (Theodore Seuss Geisel, Dartmouth Class of 1925). Where do you hope to go? What aspects of Dartmouth's curriculum or community might help you get there? (100) Congratulations! Today is my day. You’ve allowed me to show you Why I should stay. I want to explore. To research! Right off the bat, A flexible D-Plan Takes care of all that. Computer Science, Philosophy, International Relations? A Special...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay103 WordsYale is a shark and I am a Remora. These organisms share an extraordinary relationship: Remoras clean sharks’ exteriors, getting a free meal, and in return, sharks circumvent their predatory instinct. This is how I view my future at Yale: a symbiotic give-and-take between college and student. I see myself swimming alongside schools of students, collaborating, exploring; diving after my copious disparate interests. I know you're not fishing for compliments, but Yale’s rich tradition and academic flexibility will sharpen...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other357 WordsSometimes I yoyo. I got into an argument with my friend’s father about the principle of inherited skill. What started as a compliment to my yo-yoing expertise, spiraled into a discussion about whether my skill was the outcome of years of hard work (my belief), or if some genetic advantage gave me an edge over the average individual (his belief). I left my friend’s house incensed by the conversation. Years of hard work trivialized by the conclusion that...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other353 WordsMy mom is old. I don't mean this in the sense of age, or as a derogatory statement. I mean it as an oversimplification of the antiquated mindset in which I was raised. My mother grew up with a limited amount of electronics, and decided I should grow up the same way. Basically the most advanced piece of technology in my house was a microwave. When I was about 7, my mom got herself a smartphone. She brought it home, locked...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other353 WordsThere was no moment of epiphany, but there was, oddly enough, a pair of socks. A friend had mentioned in passing that as a child, her favorite item of clothing was a pair of rainbow toe-socks. Without thinking I ordered a pair online, and within 3-5 business days they were comfortably resting on her feet. It struck me how a simple click on my computer could produce such indescribable joy in a person. I was addicted. I started collecting people...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school27 WordsNot sure how much a peer recommendation helps,...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience51 WordsMy interview definitely went best for Dartmouth. A lot of it really comes down to...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 WordsOutdoorsy, Outgoing,...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to145 WordsTouring Boston’s countless institutions helped me get a better sense of what I was looking for (tight-knit campus vibe, small class sizes, mid-range undergrad population), though, even after my trip, indecision continued to flow through me. With irresolute resolve, I haphazardly continued adding...Read more...More Essays
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What I’d change about my application process102 WordsStart writing your personal statement/researching colleges as early as possible. Procrastination is the enemy here. Sure it is easy to lay back and relax when the deadline is so far...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants114 WordsTry and be unique as possible. With ever growing application pools, being different in any way is something to strive for. Who knows if being a sponsored yoyoer helped in my application, but it...Read more...What I’d change about my application process110 WordsAt the end of my Junior year, I pledged to myself that I would spend the summer researching colleges, writing my personal statement, and preparing myself for the stress of the coming college...Read more...What I’d change about my application process151 WordsDon't feel pressured to apply to too many schools. Honestly, a large part of the reason I applied to so many schools is that I was advised by many people to "have a balanced list". I was dead set on applying to my reach schools,...Read more...What I’d change about my application process26 WordsDon't apply ED unless you are 100% sure. The...Read more...What I’d change about my application process69 WordsIf you get writer’s block while creating your personal statement, try working on some of your supplements instead. Oftentimes, working...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders133 WordsStart asking your teachers as early as possible. Some of my teachers only wrote recommendations for a limited number of students, so make sure to scope out your teacher's policies beforehand to prepare. I missed out on a recommendation because...Read more...Post-college plans107 WordsI'm not really sure of my post-college plans as of now. A large part of me, despite getting into a great school, wanted to take a gap year and travel for a...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college148 WordsI cannot recommend summer school highly enough. I took Chemistry and Pre-Calculus during the respective summers of my Sophmore and Junior year and it helped out my schedule a lot. Because I took Chemistry over the summer, I was able to take AP Environmental...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice140 WordsWrite as much as possible during the college application process. I ended up writing five complete personal statements and countless college supplements. This helped so much when it came time to apply for scholarships. SOOOO many of my essays I ended up...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received172 WordsI had a private admissions counselor, and while she helped at the beginning, overall she was not completely necessary to my success. If you can't afford an admissions counselor or didn't end up getting one for whatever reason, it truly does not put you at a disadvantage. My counselor helped explain the...Read more...High School Performance
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