Brown2021,
Brown
B.A., International Relations
I'm from the Bay Area. I was deferred ED to Brown, accepted regular to Columbia Univ (CC), Dartmouth College, Brown Univ, and Wesleyan. Waitlisted Stanford (did not pursue spot).
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Background
Hometown
Palo Alto, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian, White Non-Hispanic
Class of2021
First Gen College StudentNo
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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.A. in International Relations
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: ParentSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement649 WordsArt/acting/singing, Athletic achievement, Career aspirations, Childhood memory, Chinese heritage, Creative personal story, Embracing your heritage, Extracurricular passion, Failure experience, Feeling out of place, Reaching a goal, Role model/inspirationI’m an accidental cheerleader. I’ve been planning my life since the first grade, and football games were never part of “the plan.” But beyond the embarrassingly short skirts, sparkly bows and exceedingly loud pop music, it turns out cheer is excellent practice for the life I hope to lead. In first grade, I planned to conduct clinical research to store human memory on USB’s. I wanted to be a doctor like my grandfather. Within 7 years of landing...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay132 WordsI hope to make films, and touch people’s hearts, act, write and direct, then screen my art! A film studies major plus international relations, I hope to craft stories like Beasts of No Nation. Engaged on campus, I'd join Dartmouth cheer, live in Chinese Language House and shuō Hànyǔ all year! Become fluent in Spanish on an FSP, use Sophomore Winter to intern for TV. With Arabic fluency from an LSA+, first-hand conversations with real refugees, would inspire...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school103 Words
same place, or perhaps in a variety of places.My first memories are from Tacoma, WA. There, my friends’ parents were privates deployed to Iraq and my babysitter adopted us into her family, taking me shopping at the Commissary. I learned love, not blood makes families. In kindergarten, we moved to Normandy Park, a city of 6,000 where extended families live next door to one another. I yearned for the breadth of my cousins’ LA, NYC and DC. Freshman year, my mom and I moved to Palo Alto and lived...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Amusing anecdote192 WordsJuly in Seattle It’s July in Seattle: the sun sets so slow on Puget Sound that you leave time behind. As you paddle, your kayak cuts a trail. You stop and the water heals itself, once again as smooth as glass. The ocean’s so clear that the twenty feet down looks like it’s only two. The bottom seems close enough to touch. Purple starfish laze around on the black rocks as palm-sized crabs scuttle about. Jellyfish caught...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school270 Words
important to your intellectual development. (100 to 250 words)I believe in creative intellect. When I was nine, there was some lavender ice cream in my family’s freezer––wonderfully intense, but too sweet and creamy to eat alone. I wanted to balance it out with something fresh, like... ice… but you can’t put ice on ice cream…. oh! What about Dentyne Ice… mint gum...MINT!...mint...mint..mint ice?? No…. Mint syrup? No, no… that wouldn’t be fresh. Ah! What better way to balance out something...Read more...School Specific Advice
Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred22 WordsAfter I was deferred from Brown, I...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to259 WordsI didn't apply to very many schools. My plan B was to apply to schools in the UK and they often had later deadlines/if I were to do that I would have taken a gap year since their programs are 3 years long. Brown became my first choice very early on. Growing up, I'd always idolized Yale and Stanford and never thought I'd want to go to Brown. When I started actually researching schools I realized I wanted...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
How to deal with the stress of applying to college37 WordsIt all works out. The applications I had the most fun...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics37 WordsWrite without editing, once the page is no longer blank it...Read more...What I’d change about my application process49 WordsI wish I spent less time worrying about where I would get in. I was...Read more...High School Performance
Unweighted GPA4.00RankTop 25%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
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Details3 classes and scoresSports
SportsCheerleading
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ActivitiesTheater/Drama, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Broadcast Journalism / Media / Television, Photography / Film
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