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Class of2020
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University of California - Santa Cruz (Santa Cruz, CA)
Applied for a B.A. in Management Information Systems
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
During elementary school, I was diagnosed with a speaking disability. My tongue can not reach the part of my mouth that allows me to say the “er” sound correctly, and without concentration, most of what I said was a mumble. A simple question such as, “Can you give me a cup of water?” would lead to a series of “What did you say?” and hopeless attempts to repeat the basic question. All those years of speech therapy still make me...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay328 WordsSanta Clara University Santa Clara University's strategic vision promises to educate citizens and leaders of competence, conscience, and compassion and cultivate knowledge and faith to build a more humane, just, and sustainable world. What aspect of SCU’s strategic vision appeals to you? Why? (between 150 - 300 words) Santa Clara University students and teachers look at the larger picture, and answer the question, “What is best for the greater good?” Leadership and ethics is emphasized, a combination fundamental to my future...Read more...School Specific Advice
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How I chose schools to apply to49 WordsRanking of a college is great and all, but don't make it the determining factor...Read more...Why I declined other schools74 WordsI visited the other colleges I was accepted into, and I tried the lunch room test, and it failed. The lunch room...Read more...How to approach transferring schools91 WordsTransferring can be a huge pain, but it doesn't have to be. It's emotionally jarring, having people ridicule you for your choice, but you'll transfer to a...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school53 WordsIf possible, go to the university, or somehow contact someone there, and ask them what they...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders49 WordsI actually asked my teacher if he'd write the letter for me on the last...Read more...High School Performance
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