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University of Notre Dame (Notre Dame, IN)
Applied for a B.A. in History
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.I have ADHD. This does not mean that I act out inappropriately (as many people first assume), but, in my case, it means that I cannot concentrate. It is hard to retain information and especially hard to take tests. Most of the classes that I take weigh the tests heavily. Because of my ADHD, I cannot read questions and comprehend what it is saying as easily (especially if it is a long-worded question). ADHD seemed to affect me most during...Read more...Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.In eighth grade, my teacher told me that history is just one long story. I never thought of history like that, before it was just a subject that was forced onto me by the school system. I learned that everything has a story. The M&M’s that I eat are here because in the Second World War the army wanted to feed its soldiers chocolate that didn’t melt. The dying lightbulb in my room is dying because the...Read more...Personal Statement349 WordsExtracurricular passion, Reaching a goal, Volunteer/public interest workMy greatest contribution to my school is the creation of the club World Scholar’s Cup. I started this club in sophomore year, with the first official competition year being my junior year. My sister and I decided to start the club because we wanted to spread academic competitions to a greater population in the school. It was a surprising experience when I talked to my friends who never competed. I had always assumed that everyone was like me and...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay196 WordsIn my sophomore year I did something that no regular student at my school does: I went to a football game. Actually I was volunteering, however, I did end up watching it. If there is something that is special about my school, it is that we are known for being horrible at football. Because of the horrible sports programs, there is little to no school spirit. Notre Dame on the other hand is full of it: great sport programs and...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Strong beliefs/principles163 WordsThe pillar that resonates most with me is that of Family. To me, being with my family is just natural. For example, each Saturday I go out to my grandparents’ house. We always eat dinner together and try to find some chocolate dessert. I love my grandparents and it’s no surprise, considering my first word was Grandpa. However, on big holidays like Christmas and Thanksgiving I go to my dad’s side of the family. I have always found...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance201 WordsThis year our school went on lockdown three times in two weeks during November. The first lockdown was on a Friday during lunch. I was in my teacher’s classroom when all of a sudden three people ran inside and hid in the corner. When my teacher asked who they were and what they were doing, they responded, “We’re in a lockdown.” The reason for the lockdown was that a suspect who was fleeing from police jumped into the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest244 WordsJust a few steps past the bookshelf of newspapers lies the best kept secret of the library. It is covered with dust, few dare to venture there. As you cross the newspapers it is almost as if you are transporting to another world, a world of the past. This is the historical section of the Court Library. In the historical section, there is one lesser known area. It hides in the corner of the middle bookcase. The books there wait...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school90 WordsWhen I went to an admitted student presentation near me, the director of admissions told the group that they choose people who "give more to the community...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to142 WordsIn the UC system, I applied to four: UCI, UCD, UCSD, and Cal. By the time February came around, I already figured that if I got into Cal, I would not go. But I chose to apply to these schools for a reason....Read more...How to increase chances at my school87 WordsUCs really love GPA and test scores. If you really want "guaranteed admission," I'd say try to get 4.0 + and 1400 +. UC Berkeley is the only one that...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 WordsCatholic, white,...Read more...Why I declined other schools95 WordsEven though I got into the honors programs at most of the UCs, I still declined them for one reason: they were a public school. I did not want...Read more...More Essays
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What I’d change about my application process58 WordsI'd have started earlier. I started most of my regular decision applications after my early action decision...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics104 WordsWhen I sat down, I didn't really know what I wanted to write about. The UC application, to me, felt really restrictive, so I wrote about the topics that fit into...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college73 WordsLike I said earlier, START WRITING EARLY. I had friends that were cranking out essays like crazy on the last few days...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college100 WordsYou have to be proactive. I got my internship by just asking around. It was a great experience that I loved. I got to spend my time surrounded by books...Read more...Misconceptions I had about college before attending141 WordsAnother thing that I should point out is that a hook does not guarantee you anything. I assumed a lot and paid for it. RIP my dream school. I 100% thought that I was going to get into Stanford (I know a little...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.42(equivalent to 3.85 unweighted)RankTop 5%
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