
alishaz,
Stanford
B.S., Political Science and Government
A Cameron Impact Scholar, aspiring human rights lawyer, committed hiker, and proud tree.
Features Included
13
Essays
10
Schools
5
Scores
11
Advice
4
ECs
2
Sports

Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted10 schools
Stanford, Yale, UPenn, Georgetown, UC Berkeley, USC, Notre Dame, UCLA, BC, Brandeis
Waitlisted or Withdrew0 schools
N/A
Denied0 schools
N/A
Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
Applied for a B.S. in Political Science and Government
Accepted and Enrolled
Legacy: No
School Specific Essays
Personal Statement
653 Words
Issue of personal significance,
Leadership experience,
Volunteer/public interest work
When I began high school in the heart of downtown Portland, my daily commutes revealed something I had never noticed before. Nestled in the shadows of Chinatown was a thriving homeless camp, sharply juxtaposed with the abandoned buildings right next door. Although the camp was surrounded by a rainbow of vibrant signs, I saw adults huddled underneath what looked like oversized tables protected only by tarps. What I found most shocking was that despite living along Portland’s busiest road...
Supplemental Essay: Other
167 Words
"Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (150 word limit)"
As the first youth to serve on Portland’s Human Rights Commission (HRC), I was nervous. Despite feeling a strong commitment to the invisible homeless population and vocal youth in my community, I questioned what impact I could have alongside experienced adults. However, I began to realize that each commissioner spoke through their own experiences. Our personal voices were just as important as the decisions we made...
Supplemental Essay: Amusing anecdote
265 Words
"What matters to you, and why? (100 to 250 words)"
On an ordinary Saturday morning three years ago, I was with my Hope For Homeless Club serving home-cooked breakfasts. As I delivered plates piled high with steaming sausages and cereal, I was surprised when a man beckoned me to sit down.
“What would you do if you had a brain tumor and no family or friends left?”
I couldn’t look up, struggling to imagine having to constantly search for ways to...
Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
301 Words
"Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better. (100 to 250 words)"
Dear future roommate,
Because it’s impossible to have too much chocolate, the plate of double chocolate chip cookies (my favorite recipe!) beside this note is for you.
Anyway, my hometown’s motto is “Keep Portland Weird.” I promise you that although I may not...
Supplemental Essay: Scholarship application
495 Words
My former lacrosse coach, advisory board member for *, and mentor, Shannon, has made a significant impact in my life because she has mentored me and served as an inspiration through a critical stage in my life. I first met her when I played lacrosse my sophomore year in high school. Most of my coaches in the past emphasized how practice and teamwork would lead to winning a game or becoming the best team in the league. However, Shannon was a...
Supplemental Essay: Other
55 Words
Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie (Author)—publicizes the dangers of a single story
Moana (Film)—journey to save her village and culture + best music track
Stephen King (Author)—storytelling mastermind
The Rape of Nanking by Iris Chang (Book)—gripping perspectives
To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee (Book)—empathy is human nature
Supplemental Essay: Other
50 Words
Poverty and its intersections with education and human trafficking around the world—while developing solutions for China’s urban-rural gap at the Yenching Social Innovation Forum, I was shocked when I realized how similar poverty’s effects on migrant children in Beijing are with youth experiencing homelessness in Portland.
Supplemental Essay: Other
49 Words
Throughout history, the most successful reforms to improve human rights have been a result of persistent peaceful protests. I wish I witnessed the drafting of the United Nations Declaration of Human Rights in 1948, but I would have added in the right to peaceful protest without threat as Article 31.
Supplemental Essay: Scholarship application
137 Words
As an ENFJ, I am driven to learn when I know the material can be applied and developed into solutions that will help others. Outside of Constitution Team, I used my IB math and economics independent research projects to explore the learning curve relationship between poverty and childhood development as well as the intersectionality between human trafficking and poverty, respectively, as ways to explore my passions. My discoveries in my math project allowed me to present it to human rights...
School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school
98 Words
Stanford is by far one of the most holistic schools out there. Rather than focusing on increasing that 32 ACT score or taking subject tests just because it is "highly...
Why I ultimately chose my school
173 Words
I'm writing this as I go into my sophomore year at Stanford. Looking back, I know that I made the right choice. I'm sure that I would be happy at any of the schools I got into, but Stanford has given me opportunities that made my first year one that I will...
Research, job or internship opportunities available to students at my school
179 Words
I can speak to internship opportunities because I was able to do one through Stanford's Haas Center Cardinal Quarter program this past summer. Stanford offers students two options: to apply for a placed internship or find your host organization and apply for funding. All internships provide students with $5000 - $5500 worth of funding. I lived...
My favorite course thus far, and why
133 Words
Neuroethology! I initially enrolled in the class to complete the science ways requirement, but it became my favorite class for so many reasons. First, the professor who teaches the class is fully invested in his students and was one of...
My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them
196 Words
I am currently involved in Stanford Housing Justice, Stanford Social Entrepreneurial Students' Association, Stanford in Government, Stanford Women's Club Lacrosse, and the Handa Center Student Advisory Board. I chose these activities because they all represent a different interest that I have that I'd like to remain engaged in while in college. I've found that they're all great ways to...

General Admissions Advice
What set me apart from other applicants
200 Words
When I began receiving mail and notes from my admissions officers from the schools that I had been accepted to, I noticed that all the AO's commented on my passion for human rights and dedication to my work on youth homelessness. Showing passion and commitment is definitely important in college admissions and can often make up for subpar grades...
What I’d change about my application process
225 Words
First: Start. Your. Essays. Early. Especially before you become stressed with senior year and approaching deadlines! I wish I had worked on and finished my common app essay over the summer so that I could focus on finishing up standardized testing and all the supplementary essays each school requires. I started brainstorming my essay in September and edited my common app essay up until January 1st, which...
Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
213 Words
I applied to most of my scholarships during the fall of senior year. While it's the most stressful period because of first semester grades and college applications, it's the window for the best-valued scholarships. Because I prioritized scholarship applications over my college applications in September, I ended up receiving the full tuition, merit-based Cameron Impact Scholarship and several other smaller scholarships.
I think...

High School Performance
Weighted GPA
4.50
(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted) Rank
Top 1%

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4 classes and scores

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Extracurriculars
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National Honor Society, Community Cleanup / Service, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Student Council / Government
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