pokemonmaster,
Cornell
B.S., Biology
An avid writer, athlete, and wannabe Pokemon master.
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Background
Hometown
Overland Park, Kansas
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2022
First Gen College StudentNo
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Cornell University (Ithaca, NY)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement563 WordsChallenged a belief, Creative personal story, Issue of personal significance, One moment that changed you, Role model/inspiration, Story central to identityI walked up to the house, my lesson plan securely tucked under my arm. When Mark opened the door, his jaw dropped. “What is that?” he asked incredulously. In response, I brandished a two-foot-tall model of iodine heptafluoride constructed out of pencils and masking tape. I grinned. “Are you ready to learn?” Although Mark appears to be just like any other kid I tutor, he actually has ADHD, making it hard for him to sit still and focus. I have...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity406 Words“Get off the field!” The shouts of the players formed a harsh discordance. Bruised and battered, I picked myself off the ground and walked toward the sideline. I did not look forward to going to soccer tryouts for the first time. Thrust into a world where strength and agility trumped all else, I found myself constantly getting knocked on the ground. I stumbled around the field, struggling with what seemed to be second-nature for the rest of the players. The...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay312 WordsMy kindergarten teacher stood before the class. “What do you want to be when you get older?” The response was deafening. “A doctor” one classmate announced. “The president” a more ambitious one yelled. My classmates’ shouts formed a harsh discordance. And yet, I was silent. I had no idea. Even now, I still can’t pick one interest to pursue for the rest of my life. I have too many interests: public policy, sociology, and psychology. At Northwestern SESP, I...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay262 WordsMy kindergarten teacher stood before the class. “What do you want to be when you get older?” The response was deafening. “A doctor” one classmate announced. “The president” a more ambitious one yelled. My classmates’ shouts formed a harsh discordance. And yet, I was silent. I had no idea. Even now, I still can’t pick one interest to pursue for the rest of my life. I have too many interests: the sciences, sociology, psychology. At USC, I can pursue...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school37 WordsYou should be passionate about whatever you are writing about. Because...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to60 WordsTo be perfectly honest, I based a lot of my school choices on rankings in biology and pre-med...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
How I narrowed down my essay topics107 WordsPeople often overthink what they should write about. Applicants get caught up in trying to write what they think the admissions officers want to hear. This makes the application process much more...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college59 WordsSometimes people spend way too much time working on their applications. You need to take breaks! It is...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders71 WordsMake sure you form good relationships with your teachers prior to senior year. It is better if you ask a teacher...Read more...What I’d change about my application process49 WordsIf I could go back, I definitely would have spent less time working on my...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college65 WordsI would pursue your interests during summer and go volunteer. The most important thing is to get involved. You need...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.60(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)RankTop 5%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
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Highest ACT34ACT Score DetailsOther ACT ScoresACT Prep
Highest SAT1520SAT Score DetailsOther SAT ScoresSAT Prep
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details4 classes and scoresSports
SportsSoccer, Track & Field
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ActivitiesDebate Club/Team, National Honor Society, Mock Trial
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