priya_a,
Stony Brook
B.S., Biology
Evolution + Medicine = Me I'm a pre-med student attending Stony Brook University, and am part of the WISE program.
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GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2021
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Stony Brook University - SUNY (Stony Brook, NY)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Other RelativeSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement635 WordsCreative personal story, Interest in other academic subject, Story central to identityOn an airplane, the mother of a nauseous boy is calling for an inattentive flight attendant. Looking at this scene from above, I was tasked with describing this scene as a story in American Sign Language (ASL). I had a minute to create a story that would show key linguistic elements – including contrastive structure and interpretive classifiers. In that one minute, I came up with this: the boy just felt some motion sickness. In the flight attendant’s distraction, though,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay466 WordsIn the eighth grade, my science teacher would allow us to watch any of the NOVA ScienceNow documentaries for extra credit, barring the biology ones. So after watching one on the world’s “Deadliest Volcanoes,” I made an impulsive decision: to watch a documentary on human evolution. After watching that first one, I was captivated. I watched each documentary in that series and then watched additional videos on neanderthals, historic interactions, the case of evolution versus intelligent design -- anything...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay305 WordsThe Global Public Health: Anthropology program offered at NYU is what first intrigued me about the college. One field that I am especially passionate about entering is personalized medicine, which encompasses the concepts of diagnosing and treating patients based on their inherent and extrinsic factors. Personalized medicine considers everything from genetics to lifestyle and applies both traditional and modern treatments to best assist an individual. As America is becoming increasingly diverse, physicians have to accommodate for the different lifestyles and...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay396 WordsIn the eighth grade, my science teacher would allow us to watch any of the NOVA ScienceNow documentaries for extra credit, barring the biology ones. So after watching one on the world’s “Deadliest Volcanoes,” I made an impulsive decision: to watch a documentary on human evolution. After watching that first one, I was captivated. I watched each documentary in that series, and then watched additional videos on neanderthals, historic interactions, the case of evolution versus intelligent design -- anything...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school438 WordsState your reasons for aspiring to a career in medicine. When I was fourteen, I had a bout of the flu. I woke up in the middle of the night – despite being heavily medicated – grabbed a pencil, and scribbled a message for my morning self: “Vitamin D cures cancer.” Since I was first exposed to “big kid” biology, in the seventh grade, I knew that I was hooked. Genetics, proteins, cells, behaviors, everything interested me. That year, I decided that...Read more...School Specific Advice
Why I ultimately chose my school65 WordsStony Brook has a great program for science, and they actually allow for merit scholarships, so you can go at...Read more...Why I declined other schools63 WordsI got into RPI/AMC's accelerated medical program, but I knew it wasn't right for me as a student...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture34 WordsStony Brook is really diverse, so if you look out...Read more...More Essays
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What I’d change about my application process45 WordsI would've started wayyyy sooner for the college essay portion, but I'm overall really...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college8 WordsVolunteer! And...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice37 WordsTry to go to a more affordable undergrad with a good...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders30 WordsStick to 2 academic teachers (in the field you want...Read more...High School Performance
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