
mdverhoeff,
UWyo
B.A., Journalism
Features Included
4
Essays
2
Schools
3
Scores
4
Advice
1
ECs
1
Sports

Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied

More Essays
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Personal Statement
793 Words
Overcoming personal struggle,
Reaching a goal,
Story central to identity,
Transition to adulthood
I refused to let fear win. I have lived my life in fear, and I used to allow my anxiety to control my life - until the one day that I didn't. Throughout my life I have lost everyone close to me, leaving me deathly afraid of relationships and unable to trust those around me. My mother is schizophrenic, and was incapable of being a part of my life. My father passed away of lung and throat cancer when I...
Supplemental Essay Scholarship application
347 Words
While I have experienced many adversities, I choose to use what I have learned from these experiences to grow from them and to motivate myself towards success in my life. Watching my father go through treatments for cancer is one of the major influences towards my decision to go to college and major in nursing. Throughout his time in and out of hospitals, there were many nurses who comforted me, along with my family, and the nurses were much better...
Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance
466 Words
For the past year, I have been serving as Captain of the Prairie View High School JV Dance Team. There is nothing I enjoyed more than dancing with such amazing girls and being able to learn and grow with them. Being Captain of a JV team, you encounter very different struggles than a Varsity Captain would. Especially being on a team filled with teenage girls, sometimes it can be difficult to inspire your teammates and reassure them that they are...
Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance
581 Words
My ultimate career goal is to become a labor and delivery nurse. To do this, I plan on becoming a certified nurse’s assistant to work my way through college, and to graduate with a BSN to become a Registered Nurse. I believe that as a healthcare professional I will be able to make a significant impact on my community. As a CNA, I believe this will be true in that I will be able to assist the elderly with...

General Admissions Advice
My favorite course thus far, and why
53 Words
I think everyone should take a Religious Studies course while in college! It is a great...
Recommended summer activities during high school and college
47 Words
Trust me, you want to work every summer you can, as much as you...
My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them
36 Words
I joined a sorority at my school, because Greek life here...
Post-college plans
22 Words
It's important to set goals for yourself...

High School Performance
GPA
3.26
(no specification of weighting) Rank
Top 25%
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores
Highest ACT
25
ACT Score Details

AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details2 classes and scores

Sports
SportsDance (Recruited)

Extracurriculars
ActivitiesStudent Council / Government

Experience & Awards
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Awards Received
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epnew19
USC
Accepted to USC, Tulane, Emerson, FSU, UGA, American, UCLA, GA Tech
I was accepted to and will be attending USC (the dream school)! Class of 2019. I love art, music, and social justice. It was kind of miraculous how I was accepted, so hopefully, you will find some inspiraiton from my essays. Good luck!
