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B.A., Social Sciences
Accepted to the Sciences Po-UC Berkeley Dual Degree Program! Passionate about many things, from international relations to poetry, etc.
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GenderOther
EthnicityAsian
Class of2024
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Personal Statement640 WordsArt/acting/singing, Creative personal story, Extracurricular passion, Issue of personal significance, Story central to identity, Volunteer/public interest workThe piano plays a blues-like arpeggio, pentatonic notes ascending until G#7. My fellow choir members and I begin to sing our second song, "Music Down in my Soul," for the spiritual category in the Golden Gate International Choir Festival. The piano dramatizes its notes over the line "Over my head" as we slowly bring our hands mid-body to groove. Suddenly, the piano accelerates into an upbeat gospel and we cry, "I got this music down in my soul! And it...Read more...Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.Immaculate Heart of Mary Children's Choir has been my second family since 4th grade. My choral director Mr. A jokingly once said that I sounded like a "roach" at first. Yet, he saw my potential for growth and permitted me to join the choir's rich history. I was first a Soprano 2 weakling who competed in the World Choir Games and won two silver medals in the children's choir and spiritual categories. The next year I traveled to Eugene, Oregon to...Read more...Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side."I exist explosively for phenomena of the world and of humans, The need to extinguish flames with pages and lesson All leading to personal investigations" I express myself through poetry, the art of condensing language into lines and symbols. It is my personal therapy when I'm not with my therapist. In my freshman year, I was diagnosed with Major Depressive Disorder and Generalized Anxiety Disorder. To cope with my depressive and anxious episodes, I write personal poems to release my...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay977 WordsI desire to become a global citizen. My allegiance falls to humanity rather than a specific group or country. Because of this loyalty, I am devoted to understand the whole world, to advocate for the marginalized, and to potentially influence the international arena. By attending two rigorous universities in two different countries, I strengthen my identity as a global citizen and become closer to my cosmopolitan goals. At Sciences Po, I will immerse myself in my favorite subjects, the humanities...Read more...School Specific Advice
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High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.56(equivalent to 3.90 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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Highest ACT33ACT Score DetailsOther ACT ScoresACT Prep
Highest SAT1380
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Details6 classes and scoresSports
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ActivitiesSocial Justice, Family Responsibilities, School Theater/Plays, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Tutoring/Mentoring, Community Cleanup / Service, Debate Club/Team, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Choir, World/Global Affairs Club
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