JonathanAlter,
Dartmouth
B.A., Engineering Science
Dartmouth College '21 - Computer Science and Applied Math Double-Major
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GenderMale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
Class of2021
First Gen College StudentNo
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Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)
Applied for a B.A. in Engineering Science
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement641 WordsChildhood memory, Interest in tech/engineering, Role model/inspiration, Transition to adulthood, Work experienceWhile it can be said that some are born with silver spoons in their mouths, I like to think that I was born with a logic board in my brain. I was fascinated by Windows 2000 computer software at the age of two. My love for tech blossomed into an interest in coding, iPhone jailbreaking, and cybersecurity. While many of my classmates migrated to gaming, I spent my free time surfing tech newsfeeds, such as CNET, and watching Apple’s tutorials...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay87 WordsAfter college, I hope to run my own tech startup. I am applying to Dartmouth because Thayer is my ideal school for an outstanding engineering education and for accelerating my startup ambitions. When I visited Thayer last August, I had the opportunity to see Dartmouth’s focus on student business, particularly in regards to helping students develop, finance, and patent their goods and services. I like that Thayer’s freshman courses foster collaboration amongst students — an effort essential to the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school255 WordsMy high school was an early adopter of technology use in the classroom but had not made a provision for students when technology went awry. I was part of the first student group to run what we affectionately named the “FixIT” center, but was only ever referred to as the “Help Desk”. Every morning of my sophomore year I arrived at 7 AM to the Library Learning Commons to help students with their devices and Google Apps for Education accounts. For...Read more...School Specific Advice
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Misconceptions I had about college before attending124 WordsDuring the application process, many students believe that they cannot have a successful career and live a good life unless they go to a top-tier school. This is simply not true. Although I go to Dartmouth, I...Read more...What I’d change about my application process199 WordsStart writing your essays early and seek advice from professionals! Common App essay prompts are released in the spring or summer prior to the fall of senior year. Do not wait until fall to begin your applications! The Common App main essay is dense. It is one of the longest essays you will have to write, and is one...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants177 WordsI grew up in a wealthy Connecticut town where almost every high school senior's parents went to Harvard, Yale, Cornell, or another Ivy League school for either undergraduate or graduate studies. My parents, by contrast, did not attend these institutions. As a result, I was competing against many students to get into prestigious...Read more...High School Performance
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