UC Berkeley394638,
UC Berkeley
B.A., Computer Science
Just a Cal girl interested in computer science, data science, and informatics :)
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GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
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University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
Applied for a B.A. in Computer Science
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: SiblingSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement667 WordsCreative personal story, Issue of personal significance, One moment that changed you, Overcoming personal struggle, Reaching a goal, Story central to identityAs a little girl, I was terrified of practically everything. And I mean this in the most literal sense. Around every corner was a different monster: nightmares, ghosts, even the tooth fairy lying in wait to steal my teeth. Despite all this, my parents called me their “little star”, an embodiment of their beliefs that I was capable of anything. I thought they were crazy. With time, new fears replaced old ones. Fear of the unknown, of the spotlight, of...Read more...Personal Statement365 WordsAcademic achievement, Failure experience, Interest in med/sci/math, Interest in tech/engineeringOn the day of my graph transformations test, I could vividly hear my heartbeat following a strict, piercing rhythm. It sped up as I turned in my test, and again when the sheet came back filled with red corrections. I collapsed into my bed that night, turning to the only solace I had in these moments of disheartenment: a Disney movie marathon. Coaxed by the darkness, my eyes slowly began to droop, eventually concentrating solely on the blurry outlines of...Read more...Personal Statement355 WordsAthletic achievement, Failure experience, Issue of personal significance, Leadership experience, One moment that changed you, Overcoming personal struggleJoining my school's cheerleading team was a decision made with apprehension. With the build of a fragile bird, I feared 1) falling and 2) breaking. Yet the first time I tried a stunt, I felt secure. I trusted my teammates. This trust was soon shattered during our first attempts at twist baskets. I flailed through the air, receiving a concussion that prevented me from stunting for a month. In time, I noticed that due to my fall, a lack of faith had...Read more...Personal Statement357 WordsCareer aspirations, Extracurricular passion, Interest in tech/engineering, Summer experienceCaptivated by the creative freedom of art and design, growing up, I never associated math and science with anything other than restrictions or theoretics. Hindered by this fixed-mindset in STEM classes, I constantly found myself questioning the purpose behind lessons and unsolved problem sets. I consequently sought opportunities to broaden my perspective, and one day I submitted an application to a professor for a spot in his human-computer-interaction internship. Under his tutelage, I was assigned a project to develop a...Read more...Personal Statement371 WordsCreative personal story, Leadership experience, Volunteer/public interest work, Work experienceA time-traveler is a pretty fancy title for someone who gets to bring past experiences to life, but hey, I’ll take it. As someone who sees my city’s history museum as a piggy bank of memories, I've dedicated years of volunteering with the objective of helping others preserve time and beauty. Devastated by her grandfather’s diagnosis of Alzheimer’s, a local woman in her quest to preserve his childhood before his own memory loss could erase it...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school159 WordsI experienced the rigor of high school first. The older sister, I was forced to walk the planks of high school’s murky waters without any guidance or forewarning. I felt completely lost. When it came to my sister Jeslyn’s turn, I was determined to help orient her. Offering myself as a moderator during her disputes with our parents, I became her support system, the one she turned to for comfort and advice. And when all the pressure got...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay257 WordsAs a student, techie, designer, and fashionista, I am someone who thrives on constant creation and problem-solving. I love computing for its complexities and challenges. I love fashion and the arts for their gifts of self-expression. Together, they stimulate the innovator within. Enter Georgia Tech. Here, amongst its buzzing atmospheres of innovation, is where I hope to meld my analytical left brain tendencies with my colorful right brain ambitions. From stitching conductive wires to designing interfaces, I believe that a...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay414 WordsI’m an artist in the works. Many people do not consider an artistic mindset an inherent aspect of disciplines such as engineering and computer science, but I disagree. As beautiful as it is intriguing, the ones and zeros at my fingertips become more than mere lines of code, but rather, flowing brushstrokes on an artwork that never dries. And no longer limited to a sketchpad, engineering has become the inventive craft that showcases the circuitries underlying my design’s...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay255 WordsMany people do not consider an artistic mindset an inherent aspect of disciplines such as statistics and computer science, but I disagree. From stitching conductive wires to designing interfaces, these are fields that provide me with the freedom to express myself as an artist, deepen my unshakeable passion for constant learning and exploration, and stimulate the innovator within. My dreams as an artist are already in the works. Amongst a school that not only recognizes but supports STEAM’s intersections,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement307 WordsUp until the age of six, I spent equal amounts of time between an unknown locale in China under my grandmother’s care and my familiar home in California. Growing up, I felt excluded from both cultures because I comprised aspects of the other that didn’t fit in. Accustomed to forks and knives, I was scolded by my relatives for holding my chopsticks like “a white person.” Bringing stinky tofu, my favorite dish, to my fourth-grade potluck, any shrivel...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay558 WordsMany people do not consider an artistic mindset an inherent aspect of disciplines such as information science, mathematics and computer science, but I disagree. As a fashionista, techie, mathematician, and designer, I have found passion in these subjects because of the freedom they provide to express myself as an artist. As beautiful as it is intriguing, when I program, the ones and zeros at my fingertips become more than mere lines of code, but rather, flowing brush strokes on a...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay257 WordsAs a techie, fashionista, and freethinker, I love STEM for its complexities and challenges and fashion and design for its gifts of self-expression. Each stroke of paint, line of code, and discovery has summed up the experiences that I can only communicate through creation, stimulating the creator within. Frequently described as a unique blend between an arts and science school, Boston University is where I seek to meld my analytical left brain ambitions with my colorful right brain tendencies. A...Read more...School Specific Advice
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What I’d change about my application process162 WordsDon't settle for less. When I was considering certain schools, I definitely focused too much on statistics and ended up applying for easier programs to try to increase my chances of getting in. As a result, I had a more difficult time writing supplementals for these schools, and...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college76 WordsStart early. I started brainstorming and writing my rough drafts towards the middle and the end of the summer, and I was able...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams165 WordsThere is a misconception that to get into top tier schools, a student has to take an insane amount of APs and SAT 2 tests. In my experience, I based a lot of high school course selections on easier weighted and AP classes in order to try to boost my GPA,...Read more...What I’d change about my application process84 WordsConsider very carefully before you decide to apply to a school if you're doing so for early decision. Even though it wasn't my dream school,...Read more...High School Performance
Unweighted GPA3.86RankTop 25%
Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved
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Details9 classes and scoresSports
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ActivitiesArt, Career Oriented, Community Cleanup / Service, Computer / Technology Volunteer, Mathematics, Engineering, Science, and Achievement (MESA)
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