
Sophiaskw15,
Brown
B.A., Computer Science
Brown Sophomore majoring in International Relations and Slavic Studies
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6
Essays
2
Schools
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Scores
9
Advice
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ECs
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Sports

Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted2 schools
Brown, U of Montana
Waitlisted or Withdrew0 schools
N/A
Denied0 schools
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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.A. in Computer Science
Accepted and Enrolled
Legacy: No
School Specific Essays
Personal Statement
697 Words
Academic achievement,
Creative personal story,
One moment that changed you,
Overcoming personal struggle,
Story central to identity,
Transition to adulthood
The trilobite perched on the shelf in an unassuming swirl of Paleozoic mystique, imprinted with the memories of
tumultuous ancient seas. Nearby, a yellow-flecked, rubberized lizard flopped pathetically next to a rigid plastic
tiger, whose painted eyes seemed permanently appalled at the state of the surrounding classroom. This unlikely
menagerie lurked in the background of my thoughts, a fascination in its complexity and a threat in the unknown it
symbolized. Every morning when I entered my 5th grade class, I...
Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity
158 Words
Endless strings of seemingly incoherent words filled the screen. A mountainous pile of paperwork teetered
precariously on the edge of my desk. With an interest in computer coding and a drive to create change, I had
decided to code an app to consolidate resources for hunger alleviation in the state of Montana. Living in the county
with the highest incidence of homelessness in my home state, I knew this idea could make an impact.
I pushed through error after error,...
Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
158 Words
All my life I’ve been told my interests are too “all over the place.” “Why are you doing Alzheimer’s research when
you’re a writing person?” people ask, or “Why are you coding? Are you not good at debate anymore?” Touring
Brown’s campus this August, I came to understand how greatly Brown values—even encourages— diversity of
interests. Tour guides Kristy, biochemistry major and self-described Renaissance woman, and Paul, philosophyphysics
major and president of the bird-watching club,...
Supplemental Essay: Other
106 Words
At a young age, I left behind the sky-scraping buildings of New York City for Kalispell, Montana’s, amber waves of
grain (with a brief intermission in Iowa’s corn fields). Time moves slower here; anything trendy in the rest of the
nation takes exactly two years to make it to Montana. But, a life more sheltered from acai bowls, cronuts, and
Kardashians is far from a dull one. In the simplicity comes a beauty, an uninterrupted appreciation. Now, even...
Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement
101 Words
As a dual citizen of Canada and the United States, my childhood differed from my peers in many regards. I could
recite “Oh Canada!” just as well as “The Star Spangled Banner.” Having a distinctly Canadian accent made me
the butt of elementary school jokes every time I apologized with a “sooh-ry.” Even today, asking to “boor-ow” a
pencil in a country of “bah-rowing” makes it a 10-minute ordeal rather than a five-second favor. This distinction
bred in me simultaneously...
Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest
120 Words
I’ve always been and observer. Taking mental note of people and patterns is more habitual than intentional.
Writing allows me to capture these copious streams of mental notes in a fleeting minute. Business economics and
entrepreneurship are a natural extension of these traits, something my current work in the nonprofit sector has
opened my eyes to. Observing is an integral skill in any organization or venture, whether it’s taking note of the
state of the financial markets or...
School Specific Advice
How I chose schools to apply to
27 Words
I chose Brown because of the open curriculum,...
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
Motivated, Passionate,...
How I would rate the alumni network at my school
7 Words
The alumni...
How I would rate the diversity of the student body
15 Words
Brown cares a lot about...
How to increase chances at my school
35 Words
You can increase chances of getting into Brown by pursuing areas...

General Admissions Advice
What set me apart from other applicants
51 Words
By focusing on forging my own path in high school and making opportunities where none...
Post-college plans
36 Words
Post-college, I intend to commission as a 2nd Lieutenant in the...
How I narrowed down my essay topics
37 Words
Picking a topic for the Common App Personal Statement can be...
How to deal with the stress of applying to college
34 Words
To reduce stress in applying to college, I applied to...

High School Performance
Unweighted GPA
4.00
Rank
Top 1%

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10 classes and scores

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Extracurriculars
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Computer / Technology Volunteer, Research, Debate Club/Team, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Science/Math, Model Congress / Model UN, Book Buddies, National Honor Society
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