Emiliano,
Yale
B.A., Philosophy
I am a Yale University student who is passionate about philosophy, music, and human/civil rights!
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Downey, California
GenderMale
EthnicityHispanic
Class of2022
First Gen College StudentNo
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.A. in Philosophy
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?The pitch-black alley reeked of filth, sweat, and pee. Curiously, I watched my father as he handed a sweater to the homeless man near my house. Once we hurried back to the car, I began mentally questioning why my dad helped him. I had always been told that helping others is good, but I wondered if it truly is moral—would giving Homeless Man a sweater actually help or would it foster laziness? Growing up in a household with two...Read more...Personal Statement283 WordsCreative personal story, Extracurricular passion, Interest in fine artsThe word "creativity" used to confuse me. It was a familiar yet distant construct that I could never quite put my finger on. It wasn't until I composed my own song in Mr. S's accordion class that I figured out what it is. After I had achieved the "mastery" level of playing, Mr. S asked me to create my own song. At an utter loss for ideas and inspiration, I "frankensteined" a bunch of old songs together and showed it...Read more...Personal Statement283 WordsCreative personal story, Extracurricular passion, Interest in other academic subject, Movie or book that changed you“It’s impractical! It’s for boring old people!” I’ve heard these things about philosophy my whole life. Naturally, my inquisitive nature urged me to see how terrible philosophy is; I looked for a book by Plato—the only philosopher I knew—and selected the one with the unpronounceable title: The Euthyphro. Only…in reading it, I loved it. The way Socrates dismantled concepts to show how little we understand whetted my appetite for more. I soon became obsessed...Read more...Personal Statement358 WordsCreative personal story, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Leadership experienceMusic has always been a big hobby of mine. Whether it was being a member in Mr. S’s accordion class or the bass clarinetist in Ms. K’s middle school concert band, I cherished playing music with my friends. To my sadness, upon entering my high school’s marching band, I learned that it had concluded a season full of problems. At every practice and competition, I noted the toll that the low scores of the previous year and...Read more...What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?I come from a long lineage of field-laborers and farm hands. My grandparents from my mother’s side were once braceros and my father’s parents (and him for a brief period) worked in the fields of Mexico. This is a community that I was born into and hold deeply to my heart. During the winter break of my eighth-grade year, my father took me on a trip to visit my family in Las Parritas, a small pueblo in Sinaloa. ...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay128 WordsReading Percy Jackson my freshman year hooked me on Greek mythology. In studying Greek mythology, however, I became far more interested in questions like: “why am I learning about mythology today?” That wonder grew into a fascination with mythology’s role in the foundation of democracy and western values, and that soon developed into a deep curiosity with democracy’s successes, failures, and changes. Yale’s Directed Studies program would be the perfect opportunity, if I were lucky enough to...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest262 Words“It’s impractical! It’s for boring old people!” I’ve heard these things about philosophy my whole life. Naturally, my inquisitive nature urged me to see how terrible philosophy is; I looked for a book by Plato—the only philosopher I knew—and selected the one with the unpronounceable title: The Euthyphro. Only…in reading it, I loved it. The way Socrates dismantled concepts to show how little we understand whetted my appetite for more. I soon became obsessed...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school254 WordsI come from a long lineage of field-laborers and farm hands. My grandparents from my mother’s side were once braceros and my father’s parents (and him for a brief period) worked in the fields of Mexico. This is a community that I was born into and hold deeply to my heart. During the winter break of my eighth-grade year, my father took me on a trip to visit my family in Las Parritas, a small pueblo in Sinaloa. ...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest259 WordsI was never the biggest fan of math. It was always that subject I dreaded. My outlook on math changed, however, when one of my friends dragged me to a Math Club meeting with him. Immediately, the way Mr. D and Mr. H expressed their passion for math drew me in. Their style of teaching was different than any other teacher I’ve ever had—they tied mathematics into real-life and used fun examples to explain complex ideas. I soon...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school259 Words“It’s impractical! It’s for boring old people!” I’ve heard these things about philosophy my whole life. Naturally, my inquisitive nature urged me to see how terrible philosophy is; I looked for a book by Plato—the only philosopher I knew—and selected the one with the unpronounceable title: The Euthyphro. Only...in reading it, I loved it. The way Socrates dismantled concepts to show how little we understand whetted my appetite for more. I soon became obsessed...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay107 WordsI’m very attracted to Dartmouth’s beautiful scenery. As somebody who intends on studying philosophy, the great outdoors offered by Dartmouth would be the perfect place—if I were lucky enough to be accepted of course—to philosophize and be free from the hustle and bustle of busy city life. I’ve lived in the suburbs/city my whole life, so I want to experience a different type of lifestyle. Along with Dartmouth’s nature, I’m very excited...Read more...School Specific Advice
How I chose schools to apply to168 WordsI chose to apply to Yale because of the residential college system, beautiful campus, intellectual yet collaborative atmosphere, and the Directed Studies program. When doing research on college, Yale was the only place that had every single one of my checkmarks. The residential college system, in which ever student is...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school99 WordsWhen approaching Yale's infamous "Why Yale?" essay, it is important to do research on the school and have a legitimate reason you want to go there besides "it's a great...Read more...How I would rate the diversity of the student body54 WordsYale has a moderately diverse student body, but there is an excellent support system for minorities....Read more...More Essays
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How to deal with the stress of applying to college71 WordsHaving good time management skills is imperative to reducing the amount of stress you have during the college application process. Take...Read more...What I’d change about my application process97 WordsOne thing I wish I did differently about my college application process is putting essays off until the last minute. After early and UC applications were due, my regular...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college74 WordsOver the summer, do something that shows colleges your intellectual curiosity. This need not be summer college experiences in which you need...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders137 WordsWhen thinking about who you would like to ask to write you a letter of recommendation, ask yourself which teachers know you the best and which teachers will be able to describe you as a student and as a growing person....Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.67(equivalent to 3.93 unweighted)RankTop 1%
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ActivitiesPhilosophy Club, Marching Band, Quiz Bowl/Academic Bowl, Music: Instrumental, School Band, Tutoring/Mentoring, Academic
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