vanessa7150,
Yale
B.S., Neuroscience
Neuroscience major on Pre-Med track
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Brookfield, Connecticut
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
Class of2022
First Gen College StudentNo
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.S. in Neuroscience
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement677 WordsCreative personal story, Death of a loved one, Development of personal values, Diversity statement, Embracing your heritage, Family backgroundArroz con gandules: More than a Meal “Corta la cebolla, mamacita.” Replying with a fervent nod and “Sí, mamá,” I braced for oncoming tears and cut the onion necessary for arroz con gandules, the staple recipe in our household. Since I was a child, I patiently waited and watched my abuela, mother, and aunts prepare a mouthwatering dish with the most aromatic smell in the world. After an exhausting school day, just one whiff of the delectable food instantly revitalizes...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay126 Words
Yale fulfills my wish of a college that challenges and supports me: from being able to take medical school professors’ classes and participating in neuroscience research my freshman year to having the flexibility of “shopping” for certain courses, I know that my resources at Yale will not be limited. Not being barred from a core curriculum allows a deeper and more enriching liberal arts education as well. I also enjoy the idea of being placed in a Residential College early...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest106 WordsApproximately 100 billion neurons fire inside the human brain. My science-loving parents enjoyed sharing facts like those, sparking my interest in the marvels of our bodies–particularly the cerebrum. Even to this day, I find it difficult to comprehend how a 3-pound mass, that strongly resembles a walnut, controls who we are. This topic became more prevalent when my grandfather was diagnosed with stage six Alzheimer’s. Seeing his unfortunate, rapid decline–yet still no cure–has shown me how little...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school34 WordsMy father, at eighteen, crossed the border 3 times in order to achieve the American Dream. His tenacious drive for a better life inspires me to pursue my own passions, no matter the future obstacles.Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school36 WordsI’d ask Dr. William Keen, the first American brain surgeon, to recount his experience of performing the first successful brain tumor removal. I can’t imagine how that tumor must’ve felt in his hands!Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school34 WordsKnitting Mittens for Christmas Gift-Givings: Whether to stay warm during the winter or needing a Secret Santa present, learn how to knit! (Includes viewing of Elf, xmas music goldies, and milk & cookies)Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school37 WordsOur suite will fill with students trying the best brownies at Yale. My mates will know where to find me if they need a binge-watching partner, guitar and Spanish lessons, or someone to talk to at 2am.Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity264 Words
Breathe in...breathe out… The command distracted my mind from a painful seven-minute-mile pace I’d been maintaining for five kilometers. My lungs clambered for oxygen with each step. Yet, in that precise moment, I never felt more alive. Similar practices prompted many to quit cross-country or question my sanity when I refused to do the same. In spite of my mediocrity, I stuck with running, for the satisfaction gained after meets compared to no other activity. However, our team...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance263 WordsWhen I moved to B., I stood out like a fly in milk at my predominantly Caucasian school. It proved difficult for most peers to look past my skin color...I felt like an intruding alien… ...And I still receive the occasional joke––“Why do you take Spanish, aren’t you a Mexican immigrant?”––that sounds harmless but causes a pang in my heart. However, such comments have made me stronger as I ignore the pain and focus on accomplishing...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay681 Words
Approximately 100 billion neurons fire inside the human brain. Growing up in a household where most conversations were science-related, my parents enjoyed sharing these fascinating facts, sparking my interest in learning about the marvels of the human body––especially the brain. Even to this day, I find it difficult to comprehend how hundreds of emotions and actions are controlled by a 3-pound mass that strongly resembles a walnut. My ever-growing curiosity for science resulted in taking classes like biology and Anatomy &...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay258 Words
Walking down Comm Ave and seeing familiar faces, or a few new ones...establishing connections inside and outside the classroom...doing research freshman year...these points only briefly describe my dream as a BU student. At CAS, I can take challenging science classes while enrolling in humanities courses that ponder the big questions and discussions about life. Along with the fulfilling academic experience, it’d be exciting to encounter a diverse student body just as passionate as I am about...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other626 WordsI can’t recall a time when I didn’t use a textbook for class; from the moment I learned the alphabet to memorizing cellular respiration, a book always remained in my backpack. Although classes require them to keep the lesson moving,–imagine learning Steinbeck without reading The Grapes of Wrath!–I’m often discouraged from reading countless pages of seemingly superfluous information. However, that statement is not to be interpreted as textbooks proving useless–on the contrary, they build...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay209 Words
I first heard of Brown my sophomore year, when my friend was applying to its pre-college program. “You should try!” she suggested. “It’ll be like camp–but smarter!” After some persuasion, I applied and was accepted. During that week at Providence, it was exciting to befriend new people at the Green, eat like a college student at the Ratty, and listen to Dr. Patrick explain how neurotransmitters work. In fact, those lectures influenced me to pursue the fascinating area...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school103 Words
For thirteen years I called New Jersey suburbia my home. In need of a change of scenery, we packed our bags and headed to rural Connecticut. It’s your typical small, predominantly-Caucasian town, and being Hispanic makes me stand out like a fly in milk. Although I feel comfortable in the city, I love B––’s intimacy and its quieter environment: I admire the stars sprinkled across the clear night sky, going on long boat rides with friends on our...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity102 Words
I visit my friends weekly at the local hospice. Although most are over eighty, their liveliness surpasses the energy some my age possess, and I envy. This contagious enthusiasm is evident during bowling-and-scrabble night, where competition gets heated––but all ends well with belly laughs and high-fives. Besides learning how to knit (now my favorite hobby) or bake the best banana bread (add more brown sugar!) I especially love hearing their memories: inspiring stories like Ray being a fighter pilot...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay674 Words
Approximately 100 billion neurons fire inside the human brain. Growing up in a household where most conversations were science-related, my parents enjoyed sharing these facts, sparking my interest in learning about the marvels of the human body––especially the brain. Even to this day, I find it difficult to comprehend how hundreds of actions are controlled by a 3-pound mass that strongly resembles a walnut. My ever-growing curiosity for science resulted in taking classes like Anatomy & Physiology, which fueled my desire...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school419 Words
Successful students at Johns Hopkins make the biggest impact by collaborating with others, including peers, mentors, and professors. Talk about a time, in or outside the classroom, when you worked with others and what you learned from the experience.
Every two seconds, someone needs blood! One pint saves three lives! Those facts were repeated to classmates as I relayed information about donating blood–for the first time ever, our National Honor Society would host two blood drives. As this year’s coordinator, I was excited to take the reins and leave a memorable mark; however, I encountered no shortage of obstacles. The first meetings with a Red Cross representative described the process as a “piece of cake.” Yet when...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity264 Words
Every week I visit my friends at the local hospice. Although most are over eighty, their liveliness surpasses the energy some my age possess. This contagious enthusiasm is evident during bowling-and-scrabble night; competition gets heated––but all ends well with high-fives. I love hearing their motivating stories: listening to Ray recount his time as a fighter pilot or Jacqueline marching from Selma to Montgomery shows me to face challenges with courage and, most importantly, optimism. Learning of their travels inspires...Read more...School Specific Advice
List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience145 WordsInterviewing with ivy-league alumni sounds stressful, but each interview was great! Bring a resume to your interviews and offer it to your alumnus/alumna when the moment is right––they're usually impressed if you do this! As cliche as it sounds, be...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school192 WordsWhen beginning the college application process, I swore that I would never attend a school in Connecticut, as I wanted to leave the state I had called my home for 5 years. However, visiting and falling in love with the Yale campus my junior year made me strongly reconsider my previous mindset. Before I decided to become a...Read more...How to increase chances at my school149 Words-With supplementals, show a different side of yourself with each question. For example, with each supplemental, I was able to display: my familial values, my passion for science, my dream to pursue a job in the medical field, my love for running/sports, and...Read more...How to increase chances at my school118 Words-With supplementals, show a different side of yourself with each question. For example, with each supplemental, I was able to display: my familial values, my passion for science, my dream to pursue a job in...Read more...More Essays
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Misconceptions I had about college before attending90 WordsDon't stress so much about standardized testing! Many admissions officers told me that standardized testing is "important, but not as important as you think it is." Frankly,...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college33 WordsStart your essays in the summer! It saves so much...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders86 WordsGet a teacher who knows you beyond academics! Both of my recommenders were not only my teachers but also advisors for clubs/sports I participated in,...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants64 WordsAside from being a proud URM, I believe my passion for science and helping people were clearly visible throughout...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice46 WordsApply to numerous local scholarships, as you have a higher chance of winning them!...Read more...What I’d change about my application process78 WordsSometimes I pulled all-nighters writing my essays––DON'T do that! You'll end up with a forced piece of writing that will not truly...Read more...High School Performance
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