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Class of2022
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.A. in Public Health
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement635 WordsChallenged a belief, Childhood memory, Development of personal values, Ethical dilemma, Family background, Overcoming personal struggleWide right, the forward lateral pass leading to the infamous Music City Miracle, and a playoff drought as old as I am – seventeen years, to be exact. The Buffalo Bills have a reputation among the National Football League as a team of yearly high expectations and inevitable failure. Tabloids and social media have dubbed Bills fans some of the most passionate in the League, focusing on the notorious tailgate culture. While these perceptions of outsiders aren’t contestable, the impact...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay587 WordsAs an avid volunteer with a refugee literacy program, I have worked with elementary to middle-school-aged children hailing from countries including Burma, Somalia, and Thailand in my community. Despite their young age, each child demonstrates the importance of fostering diversity in faith and culture with a level of maturity that rivals that of many adults, while exhibiting the exuberance and innocence of typical children. Thus, when Sisi, a seven-year-old student, received her leukemia diagnosis, the news devastated our community. It...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay636 WordsAlthough Buffalo basks in its notoriety for being one of the most consistently snowy places in the United States, every resident knows that summers are often relentlessly hot. I was acutely aware of this fact as I attempted to keep tabs on a multitude of rambunctious children who have not always called America home, ranging from five to thirteen years old. The heat did not seem to bother them as they eagerly ran around the grass surrounding a church near...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance242 Words
What about your background, or what perspective, belief, or experience, will help you contribute to the education of your classmates at UNC?As an avid volunteer with a refugee literacy program, I have had the opportunity to work with many elementary to middle-school-aged children hailing from countries including Burma, Somalia, and Thailand in my community. Each child has offered me valuable life lessons, whether it be reminding me to laugh off my mistakes while simultaneously learning from them or demonstrating the importance of taking time to appreciate your surroundings. Thus, when Sisi, a seven-year-old student, received her leukemia diagnosis, our community was...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Amusing anecdote253 WordsOn my first day at my summer job, I was handed a knife sharper than any I had previously seen, followed by a rundown of all of the vegetables I needed to chop. I accepted it nervously, given that I had not even a sliver of kitchen experience; in fact, my family often recalls the unfortunate Easter where I left the lasagna in the oven for a few hours too long, rendering it inedible. However, I knew that working for...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest300 WordsThroughout my years of high school, one could usually find me manipulating elements and solutions in the chemistry laboratory or attempting to solve difficult calculus problems with my peers. I spent a majority of my time in STEM classrooms, finding comfort in the objectivity of science and mathematics. Although I enjoyed my English classes, I never felt the same fulfillment when I finished a nineteenth-century novel or typed the final sentence of a paper analyzing poetry as I did when...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Amusing anecdote279 WordsIf one were to ask my closest friends and family to detail some of my most characteristic attributes, they would likely mention my intense focus and ambition when it comes to all of my endeavors, especially those related to academics. However, they would also presumably divulge my Achilles heel: dogs. While I am working on my calculus homework or fine-tuning my field hockey stick skills, if I see a dog of any breed, my level of focus on the original...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest101 WordsWhen Sisi, a seven-year-old refugee student whom I tutored, received her leukemia diagnosis, it was unfathomable that she should experience a level of hardship beyond what she already faced in Burma; even more incomprehensible was the subsequent financial strain placed on her family, shedding light on disparities in health care across demographics. Sisi’s battle made me question the world around me, from matters of public health and policy to the ethics of her situation. While studying the History of...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay127 WordsWhen one steps foot on Yale’s campus, the intricate gothic architecture and ivy-covered buildings may stand out, but even more captivating is the camaraderie among the students and faculty. From undergraduates taking part in innovative research with world-class professors to students indulging in a late-night snack together in their residential college, the sense of community at Yale exists on a campus-wide scale, strengthened by the diversity in culture and academics. While fulfilling the distribution requirements in a broad range...Read more...School Specific Advice
Why I ultimately chose my school35 WordsI wasn't expecting to get into Yale at all, but once...Read more...How I would describe the wider community surrounding campus27 WordsNew Haven gets a bad rap, but it...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school26 WordsYale has been trying to increase its STEM...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school19 WordsCornell and Penn have very similar...Read more...Reaching out to professors and coaches at schools I applied to53 WordsI emailed a professor in the public health department before decisions came out. I don't know...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred29 WordsI was waitlisted after I applied early action, so...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred56 WordsI didn't send any materials to Northeastern after being waitlisted (I actually declined the waitlist). About two...Read more...How to increase chances at my school28 WordsIn the "quirk" essay, take risks and be...Read more...More Essays
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How I narrowed down my essay topics19 WordsI wrote about what I loved,...Read more...What I’d change about my application process18 WordsI wouldn't apply to so...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college15 WordsDo what you love! Admissions...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college34 WordsStart writing essays early, like during the summer. I waited...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.42(equivalent to 3.88 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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