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avtibrewala,
Brown
B.S., Economics
I'm an international student who graduated high school with academic honours and got admitted to Brown University ED.
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Background
Hometown
mumbai, India
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2022
First Gen College StudentNo
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Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.S. in Economics
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement688 WordsAcademic achievement, Art/acting/singing, Creative personal story, Extracurricular passion, International backgroundOn the makeshift stage at the Siddhi Vinayak temple, deep in Central Mumbai, the spotlight illuminated me. I balanced, in Dhanupada, a posture embodying Lord Krishna, trembling as the fear of judgment clouded my otherwise confident sensibilities. Adorned with bold, expressive makeup, I danced my first solo at Mumbai’s largest Odissi performance, a celebration of Indian classical dance, in front of a sea of Indians from all strata. Sensing that the cameras would broadcast my every mistake, I froze,...Read more...Personal Statement361 WordsAnxiety before a competition, Athletic achievement, Challenged a belief, Creative personal story, Failure experience, Friend/relative’s legal troublesThe long-jump pit was raked ready. Diya, a third-grade Panther House contender, was up next, and fearful. She turned to me, her House Captain, for support. I knew that look. Not long ago, it was me who turned to my captains seeking comfort. Throughout my tenure I made it a point to personally get to know my House members. Having observed Diya at House events, I was reminded of her perennial spirit and evergreen smile, characteristics that embodied her identity....Read more...Personal Statement372 WordsAnxiety before a competition, Art/acting/singing, Challenged a belief, Creative personal storyGuruji’s voice echoes, “Your body tells me one thing, but your face another. Make them one.” My inner turmoil, to dance ‘perfectly’, to synchronize my torso to the beat, heightens. I struggle to emote—the essence of this Indian classical dance, Odissi. My mother has always pushed me to go “immerse myself in India’s exotic culture”. Now, with the innocence of a five-year-old, being urged to do something came the pressure to ‘impress’. Fast-forward six years, I found...Read more...Personal Statement362 WordsInterest in med/sci/math, Reaching a goal, Role model/inspiration, Work experienceIn 2015 my sixty-eight year old grandmother was diagnosed with kidney-stones. While a fairly common condition, the pain she experienced can only be described as tormenting. As I reflected upon the cause of her condition, I saw that the March 9th, 2016 edition of The Guardian reported: “Number of kidney stone cases increases by 115% in 10 years.” What could be causing this increase? I turned to chemistry for solutions. Once my greatest weakness, this subject is now my defining strength. Under the guidance...Read more...Personal Statement281 WordsLeadership experience, Love of outdoors, Overcoming personal struggle, Reaching a goal, Volunteer/public interest work‘Mo(ve)ment of Joy’ (MOJ), a regional sports movement that aims to redefine sports and create opportunities for the less privileged, emanated from my love for football and squash. In leading the MOJ team, I brought together individuals from diverse backgrounds, with the common goal of creating an impact in our community through sports. We invited students from multiple non-profits, low-income schools, and the slums to participate in sporting endeavours against our school’s teams. Here, I saw the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest389 WordsShanaya, my football teammate, diagnosed with nephrolithiasis, was unable to compete at the state championships. Without her, the entire team felt a void. Hearing of her pain made me reflect upon the root cause of her diagnosis. 9th March 2016: “Number of kidney stone cases increases by 115% in 10 years”, announced The Guardian. Shanaya was not alone. But what could I do to help? Dedicated to take this challenge head on, I turned to chemistry to seek solutions. With summer around the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest160 WordsChemistry, once my greatest weakness, is now my defining strength – a transition catalyzed by perseverance. Akin to protons, my passion for chemistry is charged and fundamental to my identity. My desire to establish the next ‘Beyond the Bottle’ movement is motivated by my aspiration to be an environmentally and socially-aware scientist whose impact transcends the laboratory’s boundaries. My research on softening hard-water challenged me to hybridize the impact of environmental factors on chemistry. The desire to unravel the intrinsic...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other205 WordsBalanced. Brown harmonizes, academic, extracurricular, and societal values all-in-one. I believe that Brown will be able to provide me with the opportunity of weaving dance with my academics, day-in and day-out. Redefining. Academic research transcends laboratory bounds. The Swearer Center integrates community engagement, dedicated to public service, manifested through close-knit, distinctive synergy. With UTRA’s support, I hope to extend my research in Water Chemistry and Nephrolithiasis at the Center for Epidemiology and Environmental Health. Open. Brown’s curriculum embodies...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school109 WordsGrowing up in Mumbai, I’ve dipped my toes in multiple cultures. My joint-family of nine, a confluence of ethnic streams, mirrors this. As snack-time rolls in, we gorge on street-food from Mumbai’s every corner. The sweet-and-spicy, decidedly heady, multi-tiered ‘Bombay Sandwich’, epitomizes the city’s vibrant diversity. Dinnertime, we converge to share our day’s experiences, each different, for we’ve all commuted to various corners. Whether it’s my school, in the heart of a commercial hub,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school301 WordsMy favorite… Books that surprised me (creators of the best debates): 1. Women Who Run with the Wolves: Myths and Stories of the Wild Woman Archetype by Clarissa Pinkola Estes Estes’ ideas reflect both intercultural awareness and profound insight, inspiring me to instill greater faith in the risks I take, my intuition, and self-confidence—essentially guiding me through my weaknesses, reminiding me that I’m valuable, creative and important. 2. Life During Wartime: ‘Persepolis’ by Marjane Satrapi 3. Plato and a Platypus Walk...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest308 WordsIn primary school, my teachers always asked for ‘charts,’ a misnomer for projects in the form of posters across subjects. But Mom, a designer, would continually instruct me, “If they ask you for a project in two dimensions, do it in three. And if they ask you for one in three dimensions, do it in four!” This declaration was always met with expressions of bewilderment, as I was left to deduce its meaning by myself. As a result, I have...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other438 WordsBack strained, hands sore, mind drained. Sitting on a desk for five-hours, I felt numb. Pieces of inked, crumpled paper dotted the floor: rejected ideas, failed attempts, incorrect calculations. I had no answer to a question as simple as, “What’s water?”. Under the mentorship of Dr.Mariwala, water chemistry’s fundamentals adopted a fourth dimension. Location one: study table. Laptop open, tabs overflowing. One question from Dr.Mariwala, “How will your research impact society?” had me re-evaluate every proposal....Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity269 Words4am mornings—enclosed by four-walls, profusely sweating, racket in hand. I couldn’t breathe, yet I’d never felt freer. Leaping to and from the ‘T-zone’, squash challenged me to face my fears. Fear of judgement—eyes following the ball, mind elsewhere. The transparent back-wall of every court enabled spectators to access my every move, every mistake. Was I good enough? Rigorous mental-training gave me the power to visualize, to isolate myself from the now nebulous onlookers. This gave me...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement275 WordsGrowing up in the city of Mumbai which boasts a plethora of ethnicities, I’ve dipped my toes in multiple cultures. The Tibrewala household’s dining table, the heart of my joint-family-of-nine, was the confluence of nine different ethnic streams. As snack-time rolls around at 4pm, this table is laden with street food sourced from Mumbai’s every corner. My favorite, the sweet-sour-spicy, multi-tiered ‘Bombay Sandwich’, symbolizes Mumbai’s diversity. This perfect blend of flavours inspires me to fearlessly tread...Read more...School Specific Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)33 Words1. Liberal 2. Extremely intelligent 3. Open-minded 4. Warm and vivacious-- the social...Read more...How I would rate the alumni network at my school0 Words10/10Read more...More Essays
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What I’d change about my application process32 WordsI'd set a 2-year long schedule that organised the...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants40 WordsKeep in mind that you are a unique version of yourself and...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders25 WordsBalance out well-reputed teachers with those who are...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics30 WordsList out all prompts and see how you can...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college9 WordsTake it step...Read more...Misconceptions I had about college before attending32 WordsIt's not at easy as high school and everything is...Read more...High School Performance
Unweighted GPA4.00RankTop 5%
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Highest ACT35ACT Score DetailsOther ACT ScoresACT Prep
Highest SAT1470SAT Score DetailsOther SAT ScoresSAT Prep
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Details6 classes and scoresSports
SportsDance, Soccer, Squash
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ActivitiesAcademic, After School Program Coordinator, Career Oriented, Dance, Math Team, Student Council / Government
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