EggZachLee,
Florida
B.S., Philosophy, , Philosophy Studies, , Religion, , Conservation and Environmental Studies, , Environmental Studies, , Sustainability Studies
University of Florida, Junior
Features Included
6
Essays
3
Schools
11
Scores
4
Advice
3
ECs
0
Sports
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Personal Statement
565 Words
Bizarre talent,
Career aspirations,
Challenged a belief,
Childhood memory,
Controversial topic,
Creative personal story,
Diversity statement,
Embarrassing mistake,
Embracing your heritage,
Ethical dilemma,
Family member’s disability,
Feeling out of place,
Fictional short story,
Interest in fine arts,
Interest in other academic subject,
Issue of personal significance,
Leadership experience,
Love of outdoors,
Love of writing,
Movie or book that changed you,
One moment that changed you,
Overcoming depression,
Overcoming personal struggle,
Place you’re content,
Reaching a goal,
Role model/inspiration,
Story central to identity,
Summer experience,
Transition to adulthood,
Volunteer/public interest work,
Work experience
Heads up, dear reader: This is one of many many many personal statements I wrote while applying to college. It's just the commonapp one, but most schools I applied to actually weren't common app. Regardless, this is the most basic and introductory type of personal statement I wrote when applying to most schools.
Prior to his assassination on November 22nd, 1963, John Fitzgerald Kennedy noted, “leadership and learning are indispensible to each other.” With hopes of following in his footsteps of...
Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
922 Words
“America has only three cities: New York, San Francisco, and New Orleans.
Everywhere else is Cleveland.” ― Tennessee Williams
My Mother was born and raised in Cleveland. Well, a small town a few miles south of Cleveland. But whenever we go up there as a family we usually go into the city. It’s actually funny, they live in a “buffer zone” between African Americans and Amish folk. It’d make for a fantastic 80’s sitcom. In fact, my first little ...
Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote
253 Words
I was defaulted into Judaism the second I was born. 7 Days later, the Mohel sealed the deal. Over the nation, South Florida is notorious for its Jewish communities. I went to a Temple for pre-school, where I was fervently enveloped in the tales provided to me from my teachers. This inability for me to recognize that I was part of something unique was nurtured years beyond pre-school.
I visit Ohio about once a year to see family. They live in...
Supplemental Essay Scholarship application
392 Words
If you had the opportunity to have a conversation with an important figure, either contemporary or historical, whom would you choose? Why?
There were two colonies established prior to the notorious “Lost Colony at Roanoke.” The first was primarily exploratory. Sir Walter Raleigh sent over about 25 crewmembers to learn about the land. They actually brought two natives back to England, who informed him about the land, the cultures present, and things of that nature. The second expedition was sent with...
Supplemental Essay Using a metaphor
741 Words
Message in a Bottle
To Whom It May Concern,
If your poor soul is reading this, you've received my message in a bottle. But fret not my friend, for I too was once in your position. The piece of advice I'm about to impart to you is invaluable, and is essential to your survival.
If you're reading this, I know one thing is for certain: you're not dead. Congratulations, you've passed. You've protected yourself against the harshest of elements, found...
Additional Essay Details
61 Words
As you can see, my essays do one of two things: make their reader chuckle, or feel sad. One of the lessons a mentor taught me during this experience is "make 'em laugh or make 'em cry; if you neither, your essay is just like one of the thousands they'll have to read that day." That's my philosophy during this process.
General Admissions Advice
Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
9 Words
Greek life and...
My favorite course thus far, and why
10 Words
Psychology of Sustainability!...
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
6 Words
Easy-going, insightful,...
How I chose schools to apply to
7 Words
Accessibility, price,...
High School Performance
Weighted GPA
4.50
Rank
Top 5%
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades
Test Scores
Highest ACT
28
ACT Score Details
Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep
Highest SAT
1370
on 1600 scale
Highest SAT
1940
SAT Score Details
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
Other Standardized Tests
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details8 classes and scores
Sports
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesAmerican Cancer Society, Chess, Debate Club/Team
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work
Experience & Awards
How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials