UPenn445101,
UPenn
B.S., Biology
Penn undergraduate interested in health science!
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EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
Class of2022
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
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Personal Statement650 WordsCreative personal story, Development of personal values, Ethical dilemma, Interest in other academic subjectWill DeLorean-esque time machines ever roam the universe, traversing time and space at 88 miles-per-hour? Will wrinkled, blanket-clad aliens actually fit snugly into bicycle baskets? Will my mother’s Honda Pilot ever join an army of vehicles that metamorphose into giant, destructive robots? Such questions blossomed in my brain almost immediately when I recently learned that the atomic bomb, space travel, and the moon landing—among other scientific advancements—had all been prefigured in science fiction novels, some even centuries old....Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay668 WordsThe origins behind the every action of living things fascinate me. How, for instance, do the circadian clocks of certain primates and rodents suddenly halt when they enter hibernation, and then restart weeks or months later precisely when the animals awaken? Why do humans, despite having two fully functional arms, develop a dominant hand as they enter childhood? And by what means do ants use pheromones as their primary medium of social communication within their colonies? I hope to eventually...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay256 WordsThe origins behind the every action of living things fascinate me. How, for instance, do the circadian clocks of certain primates and rodents suddenly halt when they enter hibernation, and then restart weeks later precisely when the animals awaken? Why do humans, despite having two fully functional arms, develop a dominant hand as they enter childhood? And by what means do ants use pheromones as their primary medium of social communication within their colonies? I hope to eventually witness such...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay483 WordsAbout a month and a half ago, when visiting the University of Chicago for the first time, I gawked at its imposing gothic architecture and the many gargoyles adorning the tops of its buildings. I left my tour that morning completely in awe; I could not keep my mind off of what I had seen that day. Perhaps, the moment that I can most specifically pinpoint as being the beginning of my fascination with UChicago was my abrupt yet memorable...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay311 WordsThe reasons behind why living things do the things they do fascinate me. How, for instance, do the circadian clocks of certain primates and rodents suddenly halt when they enter hibernation, and then restart precisely when the animals awaken? Why do humans, despite having two functional arms, develop a dominant hand as they enter childhood? By what means do ants use pheromones as their primary medium of social communication within their colonies? I hope to eventually witness such questions meeting...Read more...School Specific Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 WordsDriven, strategic,...Read more...How important school spirit is around athletics at my school24 WordsTo be honest, Penn is not the...Read more...Most popular extracurricular activities at my college11 WordsCommunity service organizations,...Read more...How I would rate the alumni network at my school33 WordsThe Penn alumni network is incredibly influential. Because our student...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred41 WordsI sent a letter of continued interest to my admissions officer after...Read more...More Essays
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Misconceptions I had about college before attending46 WordsThe competition doesn't end once you get to an elite college. Instead, it is...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college33 WordsFind programs that cater to your interests! Many of these...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college49 WordsDo not apply to schools simply just for the heck of it, especially if the...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders60 WordsMost teachers will agree to write you a recommendation, so this is not the issue. Ask teachers that...Read more...What I’d change about my application process71 WordsI would apply to less schools, and only apply to schools that are 100 miles or less away from my hometown. Being...Read more...High School Performance
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