janelemon,
Cornell
B.S., Biology and Biological Sciences
Small town girl from NJ with no major awards but a lot of heart and dreams.
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Hometown
Park Ridge, New Jersey
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionAccepted From Waitlist
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
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Cornell University (Ithaca, NY)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology and Biological Sciences
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement659 WordsCreative personal story, Family background, Issue of personal significance, Overcoming personal struggleI cried while taking my first steps. The cold sand of Point Pleasant beach meddled between my toes, intrusive and unwelcome. I demanded to be held, but my parents stood back, choosing to let me experience this moment alone. Though a graceless taste of independence, my first steps were that and so much more. I felt the Earth on my own for the first time; my love for discovery, unknown to me then, would be unraveled in time. My unwavering...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay253 WordsEmbracing science as an ever-evolving field, Boston University encourages exploration outside of the classroom — most notably, outside of the Metcalf Center. In the name of science, Terriers take “Smashing Pumpkins” to levels beyond rock music for their annual BU Pumpkin Drop. Besides the prospect of dropping pumpkins, I want to join the Terrier family, for I am eager for BU’s spirit of inquiry to manifest in my future research on the human brain. Assisting senior residents diagnosed with Alzheimer...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay266 WordsPins and thread graced the cover of Dornsife’s The Healing Process, and upon first glance I did not think twice. It was not until I learned that the pins and thread recreated “Yogurt and Granola”, a photograph captured by USC artist Alana Barrett using a camera and microscope, that I began looking closer. “What do we not always see?”, the magazine solicits in its promotion of health through the lens of art. Continuing to read, I then envisioned myself...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school264 WordsAs two of four minorities in our grade, Yvonne and I were molded to the word "other". Our stories were not ones most of our peers were willing to learn, but rather an ‘other’ too foreign to make immediate connection. Music was my counterbalance – the release of the noxious words that would have otherwise been mistaken as oxygen. As we shared harmonies, I believed it too was Yvonne’s counterbalance. One of two African-Americans in the class, she experienced ignorance,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school507 WordsOne June afternoon, I became a music teacher. For the culmination of my AP Music Theory class, my final project was to lead a lesson on one specific musical technique. I chose counterpoint: the musical combination of two distinct melodies, independent in rhythm and contour. Together through counterpoint, two voices can coexist in harmony – no matter how unconventional of a pair they make. To begin my lesson, I played my own counterpoint. Taking the first verse and chorus of “This...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay664 WordsIn the spring of 2017, I made the transition from overweight to normal weight, losing forty pounds while gaining my confidence in the process. I learned self-care after two years of mindful-eating, running, and cooking— challenges that metamorphosed into passions of mine. Seeing physical change was rewarding, but as I felt more energy day-to-day, I began to feel powerful for the very first time. Realizing my own potential, I then strived to empower my own community. Playing a grand piano, I...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school22 WordsPour your heart into your essays, use...Read more...How to increase chances at my school83 WordsHonestly, I was super happy with my application to WashU. A small part of me thinks that I may have been offered admission if I...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school88 WordsAs you might notice, I put a lot of research into BU and laid out for them my future at BU and what kinds of things...Read more...How to increase chances at my school78 WordsI would've done this essay differently. I wrote about a sophomore year project, which was directing a one-act play at my high school's...Read more...More Essays
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Misconceptions I had about college before attending215 WordsWELL-ROUNDED: I am a well-rounded applicant, not a spiked one. This gave me a lot of anxiety going into apps, but well-rounded is not a bad thing as long as you are passionate and self-driven. Don't tailor your application to being "spiked" if you are not truly passionate in that which you are said to be #1 at. Find yourself in this process-- don't...Read more...What I’d change about my application process264 Words1. EARLY ACTION: I. only. applied. to. U. Chicago. Early. Action. This was really dumb because I was deferred, and until March 14th, I had been accepted NOWHERE. If I could time travel, I would have EA'd Rutgers, Fordham, Boston College, Georgia Tech, and more safeties. 2. DEMONSTRATED INTEREST: I didn't know the importance of this. Schools like WashU, Northwestern, and Notre Dame definitely give students a leg up for visiting campus and EVEN when students take initiative to...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice91 WordsFor BU, I got a full-tuition scholarship that accounted both merit and need. For USC, I got a 1/4 tuition merit scholarship. As for Elks Most Valuable Student,...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college118 WordsSUMMER BEFORE JUNIOR YEAR: I started my internship this time. I think internships, research, or other meaningful projects (i.e. teaching yourself a new language, learning how to code, taking care of others) can be...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams231 WordsGoing into junior year, I set myself up for the expectation of all 5s, and nothing under. Come testing time (mid-April), the pressure really got to me! What I would change about my studying (especially for Bio) is gearing my cramming more towards understanding big ideas rather than memorizing facts. Because I focused on the wrong thing, I got the score I deserved even in spite of the hours...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics132 WordsCOMMON APP: This was by far the most challenging essay to write (and it's the first one you should tackle!). I narrowed down my essay topics by writing a stream of consciousness (objects that are important to me, important...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders78 WordsASK YOUR TEACHERS BEFORE JUNIOR YEAR ENDS. Send them a resume/brag sheet in the middle of the summer as a ~subtle~ reminder...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college116 WordsTo be honest, I was super stressed throughout my application process. However, I managed to have fun by being myself. For my Why USC supplement, for example, I wrote in the perspective of myself as...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants30 WordsI faced a lot of rejection, but hey— I...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.46(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)RankTop 5%
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