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Yale
B.A., Public Health
I am a first year student at Yale University who is interested in studying environmental studies while on the pre-med track
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Class of2021
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.A. in Public Health
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Personal Statement656 WordsChallenged a belief, Controversial topic, Creative personal story, Feeling out of place, Issue of personal significance, Story central to identityCatholic. Gay. These two words are usually juxtaposed as antithetical terms, opposites of one another, yet to me, they coincide in order to create the harmony that I like to call my life. To many people, being gay and Catholic may seem like a living oxymoron; however, in my life, they are labels that make me who I am. This leads me to a story in ninth grade, where just as any other Catholic kid who couldn't afford Catholic school,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest197 WordsFreshman year, my critical thinking skills teacher thought it would be important to teach us about world religions, even though it was not part of the curriculum. While everyone moaned around me, deep down I could feel my excitement growing. That day she started with Buddhism, which is probably the last thing you would think a boy raised strictly Catholic would be intrigued by, but every aspect of the religion captured my mind. Learning about the four noble truths hit...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay102 WordsYale will allow me to focus on aspects of Public Health that are usually overlooked. Yale puts an emphasis on the liberal arts training, so I will be able to concentrate on the social aspects of public health, such as sociology and gender studies, which are crucial in developing answers to the world’s health issues. Here, I would also enjoy participating in research with incredible professors such as Naomi Rogers, on subjects such as alternative medicine or the effects...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest101 WordsAn individual’s health is more than his or her physical wellness; mind, body, and soul all come together as one. Religion is the agent that molds these three parts together. Medicine and public health both focus on amending the physical body, yet that connection between all three parts of an individual is overlooked. The mind and soul is what controls the body. The mind can overcome many illnesses, sometimes with just a positive outlook. Religion enables individuals to to...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school155 Words“Health Disparities in the patriarchal world” focuses on the difference in the standard of health of males and females in developing countries, and how feminism has changed the global view on health. My mom gave her up her dreams of being a teacher to raise me. Her commitment to keep working to give me the opportunities she never had, even after having multiple health problems, is inspirational. I would love to get inside the mind of Walter Reed, see the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay694 WordsAfter a failure at my biomedical debate HOSA competition freshman year, where I learned that I oddly speak in a southern accent when I get nervous, I knew I needed to find a different competition that I was more interested in in order to perform at the highest level. This is where I found epidemiology. At first, it was a bizarre concept to me, but with some studying I fell head over heals. I loved how it applied health on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay638 WordsAfter a failure at my Biomedical Debate HOSA competition freshman year, where I learned that I oddly speak in a southern accent when I get nervous, I knew I needed to find a different competition that I was more interested in in order to perform at the highest level. This is when I found epidemiology. At first, it was a bizarre concept to me, but with some studying, I fell head over heels. I loved how it applied health on...Read more...School Specific Advice
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How to deal with the stress of applying to college41 WordsWhen applying to many different schools, staying organized is key. I made...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice67 WordsI applied for many scholarships in order to fund my Yale Education. Most of the scholarships I received were local...Read more...What I wish I had known as a first generation applicant52 WordsI wish I knew about fee waivers for SAT scores and college applications. I had to...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics70 WordsFor my common app essay I had to find something that I actually cared about to write about. Do not write...Read more...High School Performance
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