unwakudu21,
Yale
B.S., Molecular Biology
An inquisitive girl who is always pushing herself to achieve the near impossible.
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GenderFemale
EthnicityBlack / African American
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.S. in Molecular Biology
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Personal Statement583 WordsChildhood memory, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Interest in other academic subject, One moment that changed youTo say that my family loves books would be an understatement. My father, a Nigerian immigrant and self-proclaimed Renaissance man, was a being of great words and even greater ideas. From his college years in Lagos to his 50s in America, he had gathered a reservoir of newspaper articles, school gossip columns, books about patriots, books about self-proclaimed gods, and books about superheroes. His days were spent either in front of the computer, or exploring the world for inspiration. He...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay305 WordsAs a little kid, I was expected to get good grades, go to a nice college, and become a rich doctor. I was one of those kids who only wanted to do medicine because my parents said to. However, that changed in 2011. My 5th grade year, I saw my health deteriorate right before my eyes. It started with chest pains, then weakness, until finally I collapsed at my school. At the hospital, I was diagnosed with pneumonia. I went through...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school253 WordsI open the computer. Upon typing in the URL, I find myself on a website as familiar to me as the back of my hand: Gaia Online. Smiling to myself, I hover over the Register button and, after thinking of the endless possibilities in my hands, I click on it. Since my childhood, I’ve always adored games with character creation. From virtual worlds like Runescape and Sims, to games like Mortal Kombat Armageddon and DC Universe Online where my...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay306 WordsMy dad taught me three things. First, any meal that wasn’t Nigerian in nature or bought from a fast food chain never counts as “food” (sorry instant ramen). Second, if an adult wished to watch TV, whether it be the news or the most recent boxing match, there is no negotiation. Third, and perhaps most important, that every moment of my life was at worst a challenge and at best a learning opportunity. Though I never understood the first...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school422 Words“20 seconds!” My dad’s eyes were glued to the time on the screen. My sister Sarah chimed in. “That starts with an S, I know it!” “Something road trip!” I screamed. The three of us racked our brains for some sort of answer. My other sister Urenna peered in and, after thinking she said, “Surprise road trip?” A silence passed until realization hit us. “Yes!” We glanced at the time. 10 seconds. Pandemonium ensued as my dad sped on the keyboard,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay253 WordsWhen I was 11 years old, my family travelled to Disney World. Although the vacation itself was frustrating due to my parents inability to plan an itinerary, I found myself falling in love. Not with Mickey Mouse, if that is what you are thinking (he has a girlfriend!) No, I was in love with Florida. Before then, I knew nothing about the state. I imagined the state to be an island paradise where the sun always shines, hurricanes appear 24/7, and people...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school498 WordsMy dad taught me three things. First, any meal that wasn’t Nigerian in nature or bought from a fast food chain did not count as “food” (sorry instant ramen). Second, if an adult wished to watch TV, whether it be the news or the most recent boxing match, there was no chance at negotiation. Third, and perhaps most important, that every moment of my life was at worst a challenge and at best a learning opportunity. I never really...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest257 WordsWhen my sophomore English class read Frankenstein, there were generally two responses. First, that there were a billion things more interesting than some melodramatic creature yapping at its creator. The second, a bitter compromise where the 256 pages were read only to answer class questions, leading to students forgetting the plot right after. I was none of the above, though I too wasn’t immune to the memory loss. While the plot didn’t matter to me, what did were the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest103 WordsI stare at myself in the mirror. I notice my rectangular build, my misshapen rib cage, and fingers long enough to make Slender-Man jealous. In the mirror, I examine every aspect of my body’s external sculpt. But at the same time, I focus on the smaller details. When I see scabs, I imagine macrophages eating away at bacteria. When I see my hair, I imagine the division of stratum basale cells. When I see my dark skin, I imagine...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest103 WordsI stare at myself in the mirror. I notice my rectangular build, my misshapen rib cage, and fingers long enough to make Slender-Man jealous. In the mirror, I examine every aspect of my body’s external sculpt. But at the same time, I focus on the smaller details. When I see scabs, I imagine macrophages eating away at bacteria. When I see my hair, I imagine the division of stratum basale cells. When I see my dark skin, I imagine...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement259 WordsIn Igbo, “Ugonna” means “pride of my father”. While only six letters, my name is an important part of who I am, and although it has spent most of its time mispronounced and the butt of relentless jokes, my name is the cornerstone of my willpower and a reminder of the most innate part of my identity: A proud Nigerian. Growing up, I loved everything about my heritage. Food that could light stomachs on fire. Music that could make anyone...Read more...School Specific Advice
List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience64 WordsStay calm! I know how stressful it can be to talk with someone who can determine your college decision,...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to79 WordsDon't even think about prestige when you're coming up with your college list. Think about the colleges that actually fit what you're looking for,...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred57 WordsI was initially deferred from Harvard Early Action. If you are deferred, I'd recommend sending in a...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school69 WordsDo your research! The websites of these colleges are full of campus events, research outbreaks, and other details that you can...Read more...More Essays
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What set me apart from other applicants73 WordsDon't be afraid to be yourself on these applications. During the daunting process that is applying to college, it's easy to think...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders59 WordsThink about teachers who have made a big impact on your life. In fact, before your senior year,...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college74 WordsThe only thing I can say is to believe in yourself. Corny, I know. But it's easy to doubt yourself and your...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics56 WordsFirst, pick the topics that you like the most. And then, brainstorm a whole list of ideas...Read more...High School Performance
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