yujin2023,
Brown
B.S., Bioengineering and Biomedical Engineering
Nature lover, STEM nerd. Will likely be late because of who I am as a person.
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Shanghai, China
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.S. in Bioengineering and Biomedical Engineering
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement678 WordsDevelopment of personal values, Diversity statement, Issue of personal significance, Love of outdoors, Place you’re content, Story central to identityAs a child in Shanghai, I loved navigating the patternless paths of open-air markets with my grandmother, searching for bamboo shoots or daikon radishes. After moving to California, I missed the hustle and bustle of the markets, but rediscovered the same organic and animate nature of food in the community garden. Richly crinkled lettuces, jewel-toned lupines… In this vibrant and lush oasis, gardeners from all over my city craft verdant masterpieces in the freedom of their own 20x20 foot squares....Read more...Personal Statement412 WordsChallenged a belief, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, Overcoming a health obstacle, Overcoming personal struggle, Volunteer/public interest workWhen my dad was diagnosed with cancer , I set a goal for myself to incorporate healthier habits into my family’s lifestyle. To learn more about the wellness resources that my community offers, I attended the XXX City Health Fair. However, to my disappointment, I found the fair to be quite boring. The vendor booths offered assisted living services and chair zumba classes, and coincidentally, most of the visitors were above age 60. Although the health fair was meant to serve...Read more...Personal Statement363 WordsArt/acting/singing, Bizarre talent, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, One moment that changed you, Story central to identityI’ve played piano for the past 13 years, but while I can infuse pieces with my own emotions, I’m still limited by the rigid notes on the page. Rather, developing original music has become the most energizing expression of my creativity. I began improvising in middle school through playing Baroque music from composers like Bach. With figured-bass notation, or guidelines to chord progressions, players must spontaneously play different chord inversions. Despite how nerve-wracking it is to simultaneously read music...Read more...Personal Statement367 WordsAcademic achievement, Challenged a belief, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Issue of personal significance, Love of outdoorsAfter moving from Shanghai to California, I missed navigating the patternless paths of open-air markets. But in the community garden, I rediscovered the same organic and vibrant oasis. Richly-crinkled lettuces, jewel-toned lupines… gardeners craft verdant masterpieces in the freedom of 20x20 foot squares. Although I spend so much time there, I don’t actually have a plot. Rather, I walk the wood-chip paths, lending a hand here and there, transplanting seedlings and mulching rows. I snip zucchinis for the mustachioed...Read more...Personal Statement387 WordsAcademic achievement, Career aspirations, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, Interest in tech/engineeringWhen I was young, I lived and breathed Indiana Jones: I drew my own ochre-colored treasure maps and carried flashlight “torches” everywhere. As I’ve grown, my love for adventure found a more practical channel—biology. But as much as I enjoy bushwhacking, globetrotting voyages, I’m no Darwin, fascinated by evolution’s protracted vastness. Me? I’m drawn to the infinitesimals. The molecular machinery of life is thrilling: how do cells deploy antibody weaponry or aggregate into organs? To...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest256 WordsFrom tinkering with Arduino heart-rate monitors to analyzing inertial-sensored mouthguards, engineering synthesizes my passions for science and service, allowing me to generate creative, compassionate solutions to real-world problems. After my father was diagnosed with advanced lung cancer, I became fascinated with the body’s molecular defense-mechanisms and investigated serum-levels of cancer-biomarkers during immunotherapy, which my father underwent. Through studying biomedical engineering, I hope to continue exploring novel cancer therapeutics—such as genomics-based targeted therapy—especially for those with late-stage cancer....Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay265 Words
I love learning, and in Brown’s total embodiment of learning without boundaries, I can explore my mind’s idiosyncrasies and intricacies to my heart's content. I can synthesize my passions for health and horticulture through Botanical Roots of Modern Medicine, or delve into the science behind my father’s immunotherapy treatment with Principles of Immunology. I can even take my baking hobby to a whole new level with Kitchen Chemistry. Who knows? With the curricular-flexibility and academic freedom to...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school259 Words
The cart squeaked as I threw my weight against the biting wind, fighting to protect my precious cargo of 12 extra-extra-extra large pizzas: I knew that 200 expectant faces were depending on me. Delivering pizza for team powwows is one of the countless unglamorous duties of being a speech and debate team manager. But over the years, I’ve discovered that it takes much more than rigorous practices and personalized T-shirts to keep a team together. To prevent last-minute panic attacks, on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school293 Words
The day of the Health Fair was hectic, and I certainly took on many duties beyond those of Co-Chair. Between emceeing speaker-series, locating the lost mayor, and directing traffic, I guided a man with questions about heart disease to the “Ask-A-Doctor” booths. He was homeless – my heart sank as I realized how difficult it’d be for him to eat healthily and get routine checkups. I started noticing what I hadn’t before: my community, though largely affluent, has health...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity159 WordsComposing is weaving tapestries of emotion, atmosphere, and beauty from strands of sound. I love the freedom in designing musical narratives, but the struggle for sonorous chord-progressions and just the right Dominant-7ths never ceases. Using software like Noteflight and LogicPro, I tinker on my laptop with one hand and try piano melodies with the other. With a 13-year background in playing virtuoso piano symphonies, I initially composed classical-style fugues. But my curiosity led to exploring alternative genres: I was...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay116 Words
As an avid debater, I’ve attended Santa Clara University’s Dempsey-Cronin Invitational every year with my school’s speech and debate team. As I explored SCU’s lush and beautiful campus through wandering from one debate round to the next, I fell in love with the school and became driven to learn more about where I hope to spend my next four years. From attending my SCU Admissions Counselor’s visit to XXX High School, I learned about the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay146 WordsUpon my visit to SCU during Open House, I was immediately drawn to the friendly and deeply engaged student body. Through an in-depth tour of campus facilities, student organizations, and departments given by welcoming Student Ambassadors, I gained an intimate perspective on SCU’s culture of service. Given my experiences with organizing the XXX City Health Fair, SCU’s commitment to fashioning students who make a positive difference especially appeals to me. From the Thriving Neighbors Initiative, to the Santa...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay674 Words
When I was young, I lived and breathed Indiana Jones: I drew ochre-colored treasure maps and carried flashlight “torches” everywhere. As I’ve grown, my love for adventure found a more practical channel—biology. But while I enjoy bushwhacking, globetrotting voyages, I’m no Darwin, fascinated by evolution’s protracted vastness. Me? I’m drawn to infinitesimals. The molecular machinery of life is thrilling: how do cells deploy antibody weaponry or aggregate into organs? To understand these processes, I’ve...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay154 WordsFrom building Arduino heart-rate sensors to tinkering with inertial-sensored mouthguards, engineering synthesizes my passions for science and service, allowing me to generate creative and compassionate solutions to real-world problems. For me, engineering is incredibly illuminating because it draws upon a diverse array of scientific fields, which is why Pratt’s embodiment of interdisciplinary learning appeals to me. With unique programs like Duke FOCUS and Bass Connections, I’d have a collaborative and intellectually-diverse environment to nurture my interest in immune...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay104 WordsI’m an adventurer – trail-runner, biology scientist, film-score composer– and in Dartmouth’s commitment to learning without boundaries, I find the academic freedom I crave. With the uniquely-flexible D-Plan and its unparalleled opportunities for off-campus education, I can examine how Denmark’s egalitarian economy impacts health-disparities in Copenhagen or delve into the Tropical Biology FSP’s spectacular ecological diversity. I can gain a rich and broad education with Dartmouth’s liberal-arts focus that emphasizes cross-disciplinary connections. Dartmouth students’ unrestrained sense...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school292 Words
The day of the Health Fair was hectic, and I certainly took on many duties beyond those of Co-Chair. Between emceeing speaker-series, locating the lost mayor, and directing traffic, I guided a man with questions about heart disease to the “Ask-A-Doctor” booths. He was homeless – my heart sank as I realized how difficult it’d be for him to eat healthily and get routine checkups. I started noticing what I hadn’t before: my community, though largely affluent, has dire...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay675 Words
When I was young, I lived and breathed Indiana Jones: I drew ochre-colored treasure maps and carried flashlight “torches” everywhere. As I’ve grown, my love for adventure found a more practical channel—science. But while I enjoy bushwhacking, globetrotting voyages, I’m no Darwin, fascinated by evolution’s protracted vastness. Me? I’m drawn to infinitesimals. After my father was diagnosed with advanced lung cancer, I became fascinated with the body’s molecular defense-mechanisms and investigated serum cancer-biomarkers during...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance237 WordsThe day of the Health Fair was outright hectic, and I certainly took on many duties beyond those of Co-Chair. Between emceeing speaker-series and even directing traffic, I guided a man to the “Ask-A-Doctor” booths. He was homeless, and I realized how difficult it’d be for him to eat healthily and get routine checkups. I started noticing what I hadn’t before: my community, though affluent, has dire health disparities. My realizations led me to WELL-for-LIFE at XXX’s...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest265 WordsAfter my father was diagnosed with advanced lung cancer, I became fascinated with the body’s molecular defense-mechanisms. At USC, I hope to continue investigating novel cancer-therapeutics, like immunotherapy, which is why I’m drawn to biochemistry. Like me, this partnership-major between USC’s Biology and Chemistry Departments recognizes the value in exploring the full scientific spectrum, providing a collaborative and interdisciplinary environment to nurture my interest in regenerative medicine. I’m eager to delve into fascinating classes like Principles...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school5 Words
effervescent, compassionate, evolvingRead more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school11 Words
Avocado! On toast, of course. Delicious and energizing, healthy and hipster.Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school14 Words
NPR; I get lost in its podcasts, learning about everything from entrepreneurship to microplasticsRead more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school9 Words
Spirited Away, or anything else by Hayao MiyazakibroRead more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school2 Words
#naturephileRead more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school8 Words
A science communicator like Neil Degrasse TysonRead more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school13 Words
Trader Joe’s, wandering its whimsical aisles and greeting irrepressibly friendly employeesRead more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity326 WordsThe day of the Health Fair was outright hectic, and I certainly took on many duties beyond those of Co-Chair. Between emceeing speaker series, locating the lost mayor, and directing traffic, I guided a man with questions about heart disease prevention to the “Ask-A-Doctor” booths. He was homeless, and I realized how difficult it’d be for him to eat healthily and get routine checkups. I started noticing what I hadn’t before: my community, though one of the most...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest158 Words
When I was young, I lived and breathed Indiana Jones: I drew my own treasure maps and carried flashlight “torches” everywhere. As I’ve grown, my love of adventure has found a more practical channel—biology. Uncovering inconspicuous operons is as exhilarating as spelunking in Mt. Diablo. But while I enjoy bushwhacking, globetrotting voyages, I’m no Darwin, fascinated by evolution’s protracted vastness. Me? I’m drawn to infinitesimals. How do cells deploy antibody weaponry or aggregate into organs?...Read more...School Specific Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)6 WordsCreative, conscious,...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school45 WordsI narrowed my choices down to between Duke and Brown, and after visiting both...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience66 WordsMy interview with Brown went terribly. I had a Zoom interview with an alumni who was in France, and I...Read more...How to increase chances at my school108 WordsDefinitely show that there is something that makes you happy and is an important part of yourself. For some people, that can mean academic passions that translate to essays about scientific research...Read more...More Essays
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How I narrowed down my essay topics93 WordsI started writing my common app during the summer before senior year, and by started, I mean that I brainstormed and wrote dozens of half-finished drafts that were...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams112 WordsLike everyone else says, AP test scores really don't matter that much in that you won't be rejected by a college if you have a couple low scores. So... no worries if you got 3...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received173 WordsMy parents hired a private admissions counselor for me because they did not go to college in the US and had no idea how to approach the application process. They took one look at the Common App, and told me that they couldn't help me with anything except moral support. Where I...Read more...What I’d change about my application process86 WordsI wish I did the research early on and applied to more schools early. I applied to ZERO schools early decision / early action, and now that...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college110 WordsI am a huge procrastinator and I was really stressed out by the college application process. I wanted everything to be perfect, and my desire for perfection was paralyzing. On some days, I...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.57(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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