darylbudiman,
Stanford
B.A., Psychology
International Applicant from Indonesia with a Low SAT score but High Intellectual Vitality
Features Included
11
Essays
17
Schools
1
Scores
5
Advice
6
ECs
1
Sports
Background
Hometown
Jakarta, Indonesia
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
Applied for a B.A. in Psychology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement689 WordsCareer aspirations, Challenged a belief, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Failure experienceThe Joy of Life. As an eloquent narrative goes, the main character finds the love of his life to be inconspicuous. I have long determined that I would always cherish the joy of life in both pits and pinnacles of my story, but remained oblivious on how to obtain it–urging myself the same question each morning, “What can I do to attain genuine enjoyment in my story?” When researching for the HighScope MUN conference, articles of diversity greeted my...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school267 Words
Hey roomatey! I brewed two cups of mint tea on your desk. I figured some tea would calm you down from those sentimental goodbyes with your fam! In case you’re wondering, I’m on the rooftop of McMurtry, stargazing tonight’s scene. The nightly breeze, the utter peace, the scenic masterpiece–all brings me back to the times I stargazed with some friends back in Jakarta. I can vividly recollect the view from my friend’s rooftop: how the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity154 Words
The highlight of my ESRI internship program was easily the social outreach project I led. When the teacher of an Islamic elementary in the slums of East Jakarta refused to look at me upon finding out that I wasn’t a Muslim, the handshake I had initiated was replied with a slight touch of his finger. Although it came as a surprise that a fellow educator would demonstrate such action in front of his students, it quickly became an indicator...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance263 WordsWith no shelter or home, they were left to wander and roam. The murky muds were the foundation of their sheltered huts. There, I stood within the Cisarua Refugee Camp, overseeing some children playing the games we just taught them. A few steps nearby, stood a boy of distinguishable presence. Clueless of what to say, I conveyed my warmest smile; he smiled back unhesitantly and we began to converse, little by little. From sharing about his passion in design engineering...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school53 Words“Cycle of Poverty” I learned from rural areas in Indonesia: 1-Parents force their child to drop out of school starting age of 10 2-Child obliged by parents to work in paddy fields 3-Child absorbs the perception of work > education 4-Child eventually becomes a parent, implements the same perception 5-RepeatRead more...Supplemental Essay: Time off from school55 Words
2017: -Challenged myself to walk over a semi-wrecked 330-feet-long wooden bridge across the Timang Ocean -Took some breathtaking photographs along the way 2018: MUN for Everyone -Recruited new writer volunteers (Panama, Pakistan) -Worked with two Peruvian delegates to launch Spanish platform -Created journal project with Taiwanese organization “The Munual”Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school49 WordsWhat is belief? What is religion? I would love to witness a moment where Jesus, Buddha, Prophet Muhammad, Gora (activist of positive atheism), Laozi, Guru Nanak, and Gandhi come together in a yoga room to discuss "Religion and the Universe". Ultimately, Ellen DeGeneres is the moderator of the talk.Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school5 WordsSpiritually innovative mint tea connoisseur! ^.^Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school62 WordsRead: Any random threads on Quora: -Philosophy of Life -Human Perception -Psychology Fun Facts Listen: -A Spotify collaborative playlist my friend and I made called “SHIBUYA”, filled with underrated and undiscovered music that produce “authentic muse” & create instrumental goosebumps Watch: -Ancient Aliens -Trevor Noah -YesTheory -A Million Little ThingsRead more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay52 WordsDevelop my idea of “Refugees: Life AfterWARds” with Stanford’s Design for America, initiating a collaborative project to assist refugees who seek settlement around Palo Alto by providing traumatic consultations and teaching them skills of employment like writing CVs, crafting job applications, and interviews–essentially helping them adapt with the American society.Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school52 Words-Practice British accent to sound cool, making random strangers confused to hear an Indonesian man talking like Gordon Ramsay -Practice French accent to sound sexy, bolstering self-confidence -Practice Russian accent to sound tough, in preparation for bed so I don’t get terrified when going to the bathroom at nightRead more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school230 WordsA lot of applicants try to shape themselves into that “general image” of a competitive applicant because they have the perception that there is a fixed method to get into college. This would include joining the same clubs and creating the same projects that others do, perhaps even writing essays that follow the same format as others as well. I personally disagree with this perspective since doing that would...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred90 WordsAfter getting deferred in the Restrictive Early Action (REA) round, I sent to my regional admissions officer at Stanford my personal letter of continued "passion". My letter...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
What set me apart from other applicants224 WordsFor essays, I personally feel that the essence of “showing” your personality is way more powerful than just “telling” the college admissions about what kind of person you are. I would try to let the admissions officers in a way guess my personality without explicitly stating them. So, rather than saying, “I am a very approachable person”, I would show it through my stories, “I sent my...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants237 WordsAlright, so this is very important. It is crucial that you express what you did, but even better if you express what you learned. I realized that most of the time, it’s more impactful to express your emotions in addition to telling the admissions officers about what you did. If you have an experience of your own or an activity that you enjoy doing or something you’ve created that...Read more...How I made up for low grades in high school98 Words“Passion”. This is probably the one word everyone keeps emphasizing. But I don’t think it’s enough for one to state what their passion is. You should show...Read more...High School Performance
Unweighted GPA3.85RankTop 10%
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Highest SAT1440SAT Score DetailsOther SAT ScoresSAT Prep
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details5 classes and scoresSports
SportsBadminton
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ActivitiesModel Congress / Model UN, Student Council / Government, Photography / Film, Volunteer Coach, Volunteer Coach, Volunteer Coach
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