boncheng,
UMich
B.S., Spanish Language and Literature, , Psychology
I'm a sophomore at the University of Michigan and I could not be happier anywhere else.
Features Included
3
Essays
2
Schools
6
Scores
5
Advice
3
ECs
1
Sports
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Personal Statement
325 Words
Diversity statement,
Family background,
First in family to college,
Work experience
My mom came from an affluent family. She was at the top of her class and was popular in school. The neighbors adored her and younger children looked up to her. Upon graduating, she became a math teacher at a local school. But her life turned upside down when she was nineteen. She was forced to immigrate to the United States with almost nothing, not even a winter jacket to face harsh New York winters. And on top of that,...
Supplemental Essay Diversity statement
307 Words
It didn’t take me long to figure out my family wasn’t the typical white picket fence American family. Both my parents immigrated to the United States from China. Neither of my parents pursued a college education—my dad dropped out of high school to help support his family and my mom simply didn't have the chance with two younger sisters to care for, alone in a foreign land.
I am not at all ashamed by the fact that...
Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance
444 Words
It’s an uncomfortable topic. It makes people squirm in their seats. Avoid eye contact. Talk in hushed voices.
Suicide.
This year it was a fellow classmate, whom I never got to know. A year ago, it was a young middle school student who rode my bus. Two years ago, it was a mother who was discovered by her teenage sons. Three years ago, it was an athlete who was known to be funny and was a friend to many....
General Admissions Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
wealthy, cultured,...
Post-college plans
13 Words
i want to take...
My advice about getting recommenders
20 Words
ask a teacher that enjoyed having...
How to increase chances at my school
37 Words
be a well rounded student. it's actually what all colleges want....
What set me apart from other applicants
44 Words
i emphasized the fact that i was a first generation college student in...
High School Performance
GPA
3.85
(no specification of weighting) Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved
Test Scores
Highest ACT
29
ACT Score Details
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details5 classes and scores
Sports
SportsRowing (Crew)
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesNursing Home Volunteer, School Band
Experience & Awards
How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Volunteer Experiences