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Personal Statement
475 Words
Feeling out of place,
First in family to college,
Interest in fine arts,
Summer experience,
Transition to adulthood,
Overcoming personal struggle,
Overcoming a financial obstacle,
One moment that changed you,
Leaving home,
Issue of personal significance,
Friend/relative’s legal troubles
It Is Not the End
It was 2008 when my life began to change drastically. My father lost his job due to the recession and my father being an illegal immigrant, he was laid off. Due to this he had to get a low paying job with no benefits and we lost our house. He finally got a good paying job in West Sacramento in 2009 and we were to move to Elk Grove to be closer to his job. On June 20, 2011...
Supplemental Essay Strong beliefs/principles
64 Words
I became interested in Saint Mary's College of California because of the Pre-Law. I
would like to become a lawyer and this college also offers sociology a major I am
interested in as well. The college is not far from home and a very beautiful campus,
and it is a Catholic school and I found that comforting because I am Catholic
Additional Essay Details
905 Words
It was 2008 when my life began to change drastically. My father lost his job due to the
recession and my father being an illegal immigrant, he was laid off. Due to this he had
to get a low paying job with no benefits and we lost our house. He finally got a good
paying job in West Sacramento in 2009 and we were to move to Elk Grove to be
closer to his job. On June 20, 2011 was a summer day that...
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High School Performance
Academic Performance in High School Low one semester/year
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Test Scores
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Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep
Highest SAT
1110
on 1600 scale
Highest SAT
1530
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AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details3 classes and scores
Sports
SportsDance
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesNational Honor Society, Dance, Latino Student Association, Community Cleanup / Service
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