feramirezreyes,
UPenn
B.A., Urban Studies and Affairs
I got into UPenn, Cornell, Berkeley, and USC doing what I love and without sacrificing my mental health or social life! Check out my profile, and see how you can too!
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Bogota, Colombia
GenderMale
EthnicityHispanic
Class of2027
First Gen College StudentYes
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
Applied for a B.A. in Urban Studies and Affairs
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Personal Statement649 WordsDevelopment of personal values, Diversity statement, Embracing your heritage, Feeling out of place, Overcoming personal struggle, Story central to identityIf you had told me four years ago that I would be collecting signatures for Enrique Peñalosa, out in the streets, talking to people, making eye contact, and not cluttering my words, I would have thought (not told you) that you were talking about another Federico. I have lived all my life in Bogotá, Colombia, a city where fitting in feels less like a passtime, and more like an aggressive competition for survival. Ñero, Gomelo, Pato, Arribista, Mamerto, Petrista,...Read more...Personal Statement358 WordsAcademic achievement, Development of personal values, Interest in fine arts, Issue of personal significance, Love of writingSometimes I like to sit in silence and nod my head. I genuinely love hearing other people talk. When someone talks, they are not only speaking as the instantaneous version of themselves, they are also talking as the collective album of “selves” that they’ve built during their lifetime. Every word said, and every word kept silent, is an opportunity to experience the world from the reality of others. Having a lifelong habit of learning from the words and actions...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay467 Words
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Having lived my whole life in Bogotá, Colombia, where violence, corruption, and planning absurdities have turned the urban fabric into an improvised quilt, I have witnessed the harm that neglect of the urban realm can have on the dignity and empathy of its citizens. Therefore, my dream is to support those neglected by “progress” through the study, design, and adaptation of urban environments. I am confident that if admitted into the University of Pennsylvania I will find the resources and...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest209 Words
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For me to say I enjoy studying cities is an understatement. I am absolutely obsessed. At the University of Pennsylvania, I hope to share this passion for urbanism beyond the curriculum of the Urban Studies BA through the creation of a club where members can share their experiences, questions, projects, and ideals in relation to the urban realm. While the “Urban China Collective” already serves a similar purpose under the context of China’s urbanization, my club would be greater...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest334 Words
In my hometown of Bogotá, it is common to hear “Chino”, the Spanish word for a Chinese person, in everyday conversations. Therefore, to the ears of foreigners, it would seem like Bogotá is a place rich with cultural interchange between the predominant Colombian culture and a large Chinese population. The truth, however, is quite the opposite. More often than not, the word “Chino” is not used to refer to a person of Chinese origin, but is rather a highly colloquial...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest360 Words
For me to say that I enjoy studying cities is a great understatement. I am absolutely obsessed. Ask my friends, and they’ll tell you how my Instagram Stories show me dissecting satellite images of my hometown, Bogotá, going into speeches about how private country clubs serve as institutional forms of segregation, how access to transportation is access to generational stability, and how malls are inhibiting the creation of a culture that values public services. Ask my parents, and they...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest673 Words
For me to say I enjoy studying cities is an understatement. I am absolutely obsessed. Ask my friends, and they’ll tell you how my Instagram Stories show me going into speeches about how access to transportation represents generational stability, or how malls are preventing society from valuing public services. Ask my teachers, and they’ll discuss the park I designed aimed at strengthening social inclusion or the bike lane I’m creating based on local data and meetings I'm...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest256 Words
My homeland, Colombia, is half a planet away from China, and with a Chinese population that could fit in a tennis stadium, China, its people and culture, are only experienced by most in my country, through the media. For this reason, I am extremely grateful to have access to the privilege of taking Mandarin classes with teachers from China. Driven by a longstanding fascination with China's modernity and cultural wealth, learning Mandarin and connecting with Chinese people has been a...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay254 Words
For as long as I can remember, I have felt fascinated by the impacts that cities have on the lives of their citizens and the natural space they occupy. The truth is, my ambition is to serve nature and those neglected by “progress” through the mindful study, design, and adaptation of current and future urban environments. Because of this passion, at USC I hope to major in Urban Studies and Planning. Having the privilege to dive further into the world...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school612 Words
During the first weekend of Semana Santa, Bogotá collapses. As roughly 2 million people attempt to escape, a grand majority through Bogota’s “Autopista Sur”, or Southern Highway, this space becomes a symbol of the social fabric of the city. Autopista Sur’s particular traffic congestion is one of the rare events where Bogotanos from all walks of life are forced to experience the same space while facing the contrasts that keep us divided contrary to the myth of equality promoted...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay415 Words
For me to say I enjoy studying cities is an understatement. I am absolutely obsessed. Ask my friends, and they’ll tell you how my Instagram Stories show me going into speeches about how access to transportation represents generational stability, or how malls are preventing society from valuing public services. Ask my teachers, and they’ll discuss the park I designed aimed at strengthening social inclusion or the bike lane I’m creating based on local data and meetings I'm...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school61 WordsUPenn, Cornell, and USC really want students that really want them back. This means these colleges want you...Read more...How to balance class with social or extracurricular involvements43 WordsUPenn is known as the social Ivy. This means the social scene is...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school101 WordsI ultimately chose UPenn over Cornell, Berkeley, USC, and others for the following reasons: -Location: Philadelphia is an interesting city between NYC and Washington. There is plenty to do...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)51 WordsHard-working - Good grades, high test scores, impressive activities, dedication. Socially proficient - easygoing,...Read more...How I would rate the alumni network at my school39 WordsThe alumni network is amazing. CEOs, Presidents, Activists, etc... The alumni...Read more...Why I declined other schools49 WordsI declined Cornell, Berkeley, USC, UC Irvine and US San Diego in favor of UPenn....Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred72 WordsAfter getting deferred from UChicago I sent a letter where I detailed my intention to apply again in a general round. UChicago...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to24 WordsI chose to apply to the...Read more...More Essays
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Did you take a gap year? Tell us about your experience.101 WordsNO ONE REGRETS TAKING A GAP YEAR. But you might regret NOT taking one. Taking time before starting college is a great way to focus on yourself and take care...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college59 WordsYou will get into the colleges that fit you. It is okay not to get into your dream...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders38 WordsBuild good relationships with your teachers since 9th grade. Make sure...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics58 WordsImagine you are in an elevator and only have a few seconds to share what best represents...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams38 WordsTake APs that genuinely interest you. If you take APs that...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college52 WordsTake an online course. Websites like edX have free or cheap online courses run by prestigious...Read more...What I’d change about my application process64 WordsI did not think about where I wanted to apply until Senior Year. Big mistake... I know it is...Read more...High School Performance
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