stella28
stella28,
Stanford
B.A., Political Science and Government
Social Sciences major @ Stanford | 200k + in Merit Scholarships | Debater + Poet
Features Included
8
Essays
11
Schools
17
Scores
7
Advice
10
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Taipei, Taiwan
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2028
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • Columbia University (New York, NY)
  • Brown University (Providence, RI)
  • Northwestern University (Evanston, IL)
  • Duke University (Durham, NC)
  • Amherst College (Amherst, MA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • Georgetown University (Washington, DC)
  • Emory University (Atlanta, GA)
  • Barnard College (New York, NY)
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Stanford University (Stanford, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Political Science and Government

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
A million ideas burst from my brain and died on my fingertips. The blinking cursor was the only color on the empty page, disapprovingly counting every second of my struggle. Concepts bubbled on the tip of my tongue, but not a single one translated into actual words. As Kurt Vonnegut said, “When I write, I feel like an armless, legless man with a crayon in his mouth.” Literally me. I knew what I wanted to say—I even had the...
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Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest
247 Words
Reflect on an idea or experience that makes you genuinely excited about learning. // Tell us about an intellectual experience in the past two years that you found absolutely fascinating.



(250 words)



As our research cohort finished the last chapter on feminist legal theories, exploring their implications on women’s lives from employment to pregnancies to marriage, something was missing. Where was the section about periods? Despite periods’ demanding role in the lives of billions of women, there was nothing in our extensive textbook about how our laws should support menstruators. In disbelief, I decided to write my paper about the absence of menstrual care in America. To start, I discovered the...
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Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement
238 Words
Please describe what aspects of your life experiences, interests and character would help you make a distinctive contribution as an undergraduate to XXX University. (250 words)
My upbringing straddled the Taiwan Strait, the watery line that separates Taiwan and China. Because I lived in the mainland for [Content Redaction for Privacy Concerns] years, my sense of the world developed under the carefully constructed narratives crafted by my school, the state, and China’s media. For instance, when I introduced myself as Taiwanese, my peers would dismiss me as Chinese, saying that there was no difference. I was taught to believe that the people across the strait...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
195 Words
How will you explore the community at Penn? Consider how this community will help shape your perspective and identity, and how your identity and perspective will help shape this community.



(200 word max)



Sophomore year, I co-founded the [Content Redaction for Privacy Concerns] with my friend to create a sanctuary for writers to share their work and write together. I see the same spirit of celebrating writing at Penn’s Kelly Writers House. I can already imagine myself sharing a coffee with the Writers House Fellows in the Arts Cafe, or performing one of my own pieces during the annual Speakeasy student-run open mic night. I also hope to continue inspiring young writers...
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Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity
159 Words
Emory University has a strong commitment to building community. Tell us about a community you have been part of where your participation helped to change or shape the community for the better. (150 words)
Sophomore year, I joined Schoolhouse.world, a free, online peer tutoring community. I love tutoring here because my students were always genuinely curious. As Schoolhouse heavily favored math courses, I attempted to diversify the pool through public speaking. People flocked to my “[Content Redaction for Privacy Concerns]” series that explored the eight speech and debate events I have participated in, from MUN to Public Forum debate, highlighting their unique characteristics, from speaking in formalities to brainstorming persuasive one-liners. Recently, one...
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Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest
357 Words
Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity. (350 words)
Since I was young, I religiously believed in fairness. From telling a couple they cut the line at an amusement park to telling on a kindergarten classmate who snatched my markers, I always spoke out against injustice. As I explored the law, the biographical film “On the Basis of Sex” inspired me. Watching former Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg challenge the Supreme Court, I realized not only could I use the law to address injustices, I could also change unfair laws...
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Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
265 Words
Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better.



(250 words)



Hi Roomie! Everyone at Stanford is so accomplished, I’m pretty sure I heard there was an astronaut and a Nobel prize winner in our class. While I have my strengths, I’m also TERRIBLE at a lot of things—that won’t stop me from doing them anyway! Even though I’m slightly tone deaf, I audition for the school musicals and belt out Taylor Swift songs. I won’t hesitate to jam to JustDance and film a Tik...
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Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity
183 Words
Please describe a barrier or obstacle you have faced and discuss the personal qualities, skills or insights you have developed as a result. // What lessons have you learned in life thus far? What will your classmates learn from you? In short, how has your lived experience shaped you? //Reflect on an element of your personal experience that you feel will enrich your college. How has it shaped you? Etc. (Word count varied for different schools)

Sophomore year, I faced my greatest debate crisis: not winning. Struggling with a new partner and confronting the male-dominated debate space, I was disheartened to only cheer my teammates from the sidelines. Despite considering quitting, I instead excused myself from practice to reflect. Distancing myself from debate reminded me how I reveled in conquering unfamiliar topics and missed the adrenaline of responding to obscure arguments in my speech—all irrespective of winning. I returned to my team with a new...
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School Specific Advice

How to increase chances at my school
94 Words
For Penn, Columbia and Barnard, I submitted an additional creative writing supplement. These were by far the most extensive additional supplements, but I think they definitely added to...
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List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience
179 Words
I interviewed for all of the schools above and I had several different experiences. I'll be very honest, I really leaned onto my debate experience to carry me through my interviews. I never did any intentional preparation for any of them other than "think about the things I've done in my life" because...
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How to increase chances at my school
114 Words
The Brown video introduction says it's optional, but it really isn't. I spent about 3 hours recording and editing on CapCut (it's free!) and sent out a polished video that I think really helped consolidate...
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How to increase chances at my school
95 Words
For Stanford, I think what helped me was showing that I was a well-rounded student. From my profile, it's pretty clear I lean Social Science/humanities, so during my...
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More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

How to deal with the stress of applying to college
65 Words
Throughout the college application process, the easiest way my stress manifested is through scrolling through my email and watching college...
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My advice about getting recommenders
130 Words
I knew I always wanted my debate coach to be a recommender, so I took many of his classes throughout high school as well, which also lined up with my interests in Government and Public Speaking. For my other...
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How I narrowed down my essay topics
106 Words
PRO TIP: start your essays during the summer. No matter how much I dragged my feet sitting down in front of my desk in July, it was 100x better than trying to...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.63
(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)
Rank
Top 1%
 
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1570
 
SAT Score Details
 
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
PSAT Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details15 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesDebate Club/Team, Debate Club/Team, Volunteer Coach, Research, Other Club/Activity, Other Club/Activity, Other Club/Activity, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Other Club/Activity, Student Council / Government

Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences
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