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ShaneNYUStern,
NYU
B.B.A., Sales and Marketing, , Marketing, , International Business, , Finance, , Banking and Finance
All-American Swimmer, Coca-Cola Scholar, NYU Stern Class of 2019. I am pursuing a major in Marketing or Finance with a minor in International Business
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Background
Hometown
Fairfax Station, Virginia
GenderMale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision, Recruited for Sport
Class of2019
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Greek
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Results, Essays, and Advice
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New York University (New York, NY)
Applied for a B.B.A. in Sales and Marketing
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
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This was all very different to me. It wasn’t the fact that I was on a plane. I had flown many times before. It wasn’t the fact that I was flying to Europe. I had done that two years ago when my family returned to Moscow with my adopted sister. This time, it had to do with me. I was sitting next to an old English man with ruddy skin that glared my direction every time the cabin...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay405 WordsOn my plate was sushi, stir-fry, a turkey-burger, and a vegan spinach salad. Days before, on another college recruiting trip, I had eaten “mystery meat” in brown gravy for all 48 hours of my trip. It hit me! This is what NYU can offer me. It can offer me diversity: a smorgasbord of life. My dining hall experience paralleled what NYU can offer me. Some people are meat and potatoes kind of people. I am not. I like variety. I like...Read more...Additional Essay Details741 WordsThe essay topic for NYU 2015 was: NYU is global, urban, inspired, smart, connected, and bold. What can NYU offer you, and what can you offer NYU? ... Now this topic seems very daunting because at the age of 18, not many of us are as amazing as NYU, yet we don't want to sound like we are pleading for them to accept us. Think hard, at the time when I was writing this essay, I was hungry. I believe the food metaphors...Read more...General Admissions Advice
What I like about my school’s location and culture301 WordsThere is nothing like NYU, the availability to internships all year round at a business school that is consistently ranked within the top 5 in the country. The odds cannot be beat. There is a reason that it isn't called The Wolf of Cambridge, Mass. Its because business comes to New York City, and only Stern students have full access to it day-in and day-out. If NYU Stern isn’t on your list, then perhaps you should take a step back and research the school more closely. It’s a...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice56 WordsApply to every scholarship that allows you to do so. Never in a million years would I...Read more...How to increase chances at my school166 WordsI had a 3.7 weighted GPA and 1910 on my SAT's. Do not assume that just because you don't have a 4.9 and 2400 that you won't get in. NYU is a global campus, what they're looking for is well-rounded, diverse and driven kids. My essays, which are what I believe got me in,...Read more...Reaching out to professors and coaches at schools I applied to388 WordsBeing an athlete you have to make a very hard decision, do you continue to play the game that you love, or do you try to pursue an education that will set you up for a more plausible and successful life. Few people are able to play sports in college, even fewer are able to then go on to play professionally. And lastly, only a fraction of the smallest percent are able to make a living off of the money that they earn from competing. I commend those that are able to make a living of their sport, but for...Read more...High School Performance
GPA3.78(no specification of weighting)RankTop 25%
Academic Performance in High School Some good some bad
Explanation of Low Grades
Test Scores
Highest ACT29ACT Score Details
Highest SAT1910SAT Score Details
Other SAT ScoresSAT Prep
Other Standardized Tests
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details9 classes and scoresSports
SportsSwimming/Diving
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesAfter School Program Coordinator, After School Sports Coach, American Cancer Society, Athletics Organization, Charity Drive Organizing, Church, DECA (Distributive Education Clubs of America), Homecoming committee, Junior Classical League / Latin Club, National Honor Society, Political Campaign, Prom Committee, Student Activities Committee, Student Council / Government, United Service Organizations (USO) / Veterans Affairs (VA)
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