cindy_dartmout,
Dartmouth
B.A., Economics, , Romance Languages and Literatures, , Engineering Design
Dartmouth Class of 2018
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18
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Scores
7
Advice
8
ECs
0
Sports
Background
Hometown
Los Angeles, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2018
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Spanish, Portuguese, Mandarin
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)
Applied for a B.A. in Economics
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Personal Statement660 WordsCreative personal story, Leadership experience, Place you’re content, Story central to identity, Summer experience, Volunteer/public interest workI had always considered myself decent at breathing. But my sudden near-hyperventilation, along with a doubled heart rate and flailing limbs, suggested otherwise. I clicked “refresh” to make sure it wasn’t a mistake. Ten more times. Shop Me—a non-profit, online retail clothing store I had started just two months prior—had made its first international sale. The idea for Shop Me had come to me at the end of my sophomore summer as I sat, bawling my eyes...Read more...Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote421 WordsWhen I was nine years old, I was convinced that I’d make a fortune if I became Uncle Laoshu’s betta fish breeder. Seeing how well they sold in his pet shop, I hoped to produce enough betta babies to fill the fish shelf. Although Laoshu warned me that betta fish, also known as Siamese fighting fish, would kill each other if two were ever placed in the same tank, I believed this was a multi-dollar fish empire in...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school63 WordsYearbook is my favorite part of the school day. My life would be incomplete without designing until 4 PM, delegating tasks to section editors, and ordering Thai food for the Yearbook Gang - my 22-person family. Becoming the youngest-ever editor-in-chief wasn’t easy - it put me in charge of older kids whom I admired. [see HS Extracurricular to read rest of essay]Read more...Supplemental Essay Strong beliefs/principles258 WordsAs a longtime connoisseur of yogurt—and of Greek yogurt in particular—I consider myself an educated yogurt consumer. And any educated Greek yogurt consumer in the United States knows that there is one brand that tastes exponentially better than the rest: Fage Total Greek Yogurt. In fact, it’s the number one seller in Greece itself! But I’d venture to say that the vast majority of yogurt consumers have, at least once, made the following tragic but understandable...Read more...Additional Essay Details667 WordsWhen I was nine years old, I was convinced that I’d make a fortune if I became Uncle Laoshu’s betta fish breeder. Seeing how well they sold in his pet shop, I hoped to produce enough betta babies to fill the fish shelf. Although Laoshu warned me that betta fish, also known as Siamese fighting fish, would kill each other if two were ever placed in the same tank, I believed this was a multi-dollar fish empire in...Read more...General Admissions Advice
Most popular extracurricular activities at my college11 WordsNewspaper/Journalism, Sports ...Read more...My favorite course thus far, and why86 WordsThe benefits of attending a liberal arts college include the ability to take interdisciplinary classes that help you explore topics that have never been introduced to...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 Wordsinvolved, extroverted,...Read more...What I’d change about my school if I were student body president9 WordsMore social activities...Read more...What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling10 WordsThe extent to...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received110 WordsUsed 2 private counselors - the first one, called Ivy Coach, is awful. They are very close-minded and have a strict idea of how you should write your essay (or how they should write...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience30 WordsWUSTL Dartmouth Duke UPenn Princeton MIT...Read more...High School Performance
GPA3.95(no specification of weighting)RankTop 10%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
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AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details12 classes and scoresSports
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesAsian Club / Asian Interactive Youth Association, Admissions or Post-Acceptance Committee, Key Club, Library Volunteer, School Band, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Tutoring/Mentoring, Yearbook
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