Was I about to do it? It went against everything I believed in. Never in my life had I tried kabobs from a street cart in England. It was just utterly ridiculous. Yet, I was not alone. I accompanied my brother to the kabob cart on Carnaby Street. It was a decisive moment, and I failed to hold my ground. My brother successfully convinced me to give them a try. Having spent a large portion of my summers with family...

I discussed specifically what activities I would be involved in on campus (i.e. research with Professor Kaveh Jorbachi and shadowing a pediatrician at MedStar Georgetown University Hospital). The more specific you can make the essay to the university, the better the essay will appear to an admissions officer.

The warm summer air ruffled my hair as I took a cursory glance around. The luscious green lawn outside White Gravenor Hall was somewhere I could envision myself leaning against a tree to read a novel or participating in Georgetown Day. At Georgetown, I would be able to pursue my desire to be a connoisseur through the Bakers at Georgetown Club, where I would be learning about the edible pleasure in life with friends. I have begun to learn Russian...

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