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Hometown
Cypress, Texas
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic, Not Listed
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2020
First Gen College StudentYes
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Arabic, Spanish
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University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement670 WordsChildhood memory, Embracing your heritage, Family background, Family member’s disability, Feeling out of place, Overcoming a financial obstacle, Overcoming personal struggle, Story central to identitySome students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. My early childhood was filled with countless smiles and laughter, abundant toys and clothes, and the comfortingly familiar faces of aunts and uncles, grandparents and cousins. Until the age of five, I lived with my younger sister, mother and father in a cozy two-bedroom apartment located in Hackensack,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay512 WordsPlease reflect on what you consider to be an important personal experience related to your talents, interests, or commitments. Using this experience, please tell us what you learned about yourself. How will this experience prepare you for success at Rutgers? After moving to Houston from Long Island, I was blessed to find a myriad of service opportunities that I could partake in to contribute to my community. I volunteer with many service organizations including Health Occupations Students of America, Key...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Strong beliefs/principles489 WordsEverything I am I inherited from my family. My untamable brown curls--my grandmother; my prominent nose--my mom; my humanitarianism--my dad. Before he came to America and had me, my dad was a family physician living in his Egyptian hometown. Patients flocked to his office for medical advice and treatment for their aches and pains. He cared deeply for every one of his patients and stayed awake through many a night to treat and support them. After coming to America, he...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Strong beliefs/principles283 WordsAfter moving to Texas, I was thankful for the myriad of service opportunities that I could partake of. Although I am a part of many service organizations, the one that is the most important to me is the Breakfast Club, a student-led club dedicated to aiding the movement to end world hunger. Breakfast Club mainly volunteers at the food pantry at Cypress Assistance Ministries, a non-profit organization that serves those in financial crises, near homelessness, the elderly, or the unemployed....Read more...Supplemental Essay: Strong beliefs/principles737 WordsConsidering your lifetime goals, discuss how your current and future academic and extracurricular activities might help you achieve your goals. I love learning about the human body, which is why I will major in biology. I find everything—from the trillions of individual microscopic cells it is composed of to the structure of the brain—to be absolutely incredible. The human body has always been a captivating subject to me ever since I can remember, which is another reason why...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Amusing anecdote603 WordsDescribe an experience which caused you to change your perspective and/or opinon. How did this affect you? It was the first day of second grade. My stomach was a cage full of butterflies. It was my first day of school in Long Island, New York, with a new set of classmates. I was as nervous as I was optimistic about making new friends. Since I was a new student in Carle Place, a hamlet with an area of one...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay277 WordsDescribe your academic interests and how you plan to pursue them at USC. Please feel free to address your first- and second-choice major selections (250 word limit) I love learning about the human body which is why I will major in biology. I find everything—from the trillions of individual microscopic cells it is composed of to the structure of the brain—to be absolutely incredible. What I find very interesting about the human body is its defense mechanism against invading...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Strong beliefs/principles208 WordsUSC students are known to be involved. Briefly describe a non-academic pursuit (such as service to community or family, a club or sport, or work, etc.,) that best illustrates who you are, and why it is important to you. (250 word limit) I have been volunteering at the food pantry at Cypress Assistance Ministries, a non-profit organization, on Saturday mornings during the school year for almost two years. My responsibility is to sort nonperishable food donations and assist in creating packages...Read more...School Specific Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 WordsAmbitious, energetic,...Read more...Most popular extracurricular activities at my college16 WordsThe most popular extracurricular activities...Read more...My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them61 WordsI am currently a QuestBridge Scholar, a member of the First Generation Student Union, a member of the...Read more...My favorite course thus far, and why41 WordsMy favorite course this far is The Modern Middle East (HIST-383) because...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture37 WordsWhat I LOVE about my school's location and culture is that...Read more...What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling38 WordsWhat I now know about my school that I never would...Read more...What I’d change about my school if I were student body president33 WordsIf I were student body president, I would make sure...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school40 WordsWhat I used for this topic was my interest and passion for...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice62 WordsI regret not applying to more scholarships because I wouldn't have had to take out as much in loans...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to17 WordsI chose schools with good,...Read more...How I would describe the wider community surrounding campus44 WordsLA is immensely diverse and full of places to explore. However a lot...Read more...How I would rate the alumni network at my school52 WordsThe alumni network/Trojan name can go a long way. There are many online networks like...Read more...How I would rate the diversity of the student body28 WordsOver recent years, I would say that diversity...Read more...How I would rate the career center or my advisor28 WordsThe career center is very very helpful with...Read more...How important school spirit is around athletics at my school26 WordsSports at USC are HUGE, especially football. If...Read more...How to balance class with social or extracurricular involvements31 WordsSchedule your time and stay focused!!! Use a planner...Read more...My plans for a typical weekend20 WordsUsually studying, but sometimes I plan...Read more...My schedule on a typical weekday29 WordsClasses from 9 am to 2 pm, sometimes a lab later...Read more...Research, job or internship opportunities available to students at my school93 WordsSince USC is a large research university, chances are your professors are already involved in research. If they teach in a field you like, ask them if they...Read more...The academic rigor of a typical course load or in my major48 WordsThe premed track at USC is DEFINITELY not a walk in the park. Exams...Read more...The stress level and competitiveness of a typical student at my school64 WordsA few years ago, I remember seeing USC as #18 on an article listing the top 50 most stressed out schools...Read more...What are opportunities unique to my school31 WordsThere are so many cool study abroad opportunities! I...Read more...More Essays
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Post-college plans18 WordsI plan to go to...Read more...What I’d change about my application process36 WordsManage your time wisely!!! In order to prevent unnecessary stress, it...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience158 WordsI interviewed with UPenn, Yale, Brown, Dartmouth, Tufts, Princeton, and Cornell. Fortunately, I had a pleasant experience with all my interviewers. Be ready to talk about yourself, your background, your passions, and your extracurriculars. Dress nice, but not too formal. Even if you aren't confident, fake it....Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college111 WordsGo to medical camps, volunteer in hospitals, etc. if you wish to do something in medicine. Find things that pertain to your desired field. For example, you can shadow or intern with someone...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants39 WordsI believe my hardships as well as my academic interests in science...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders46 WordsAsk recommendations from your teachers from junior year who have observed your impeccable work...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to15 WordsI looked at schools that...Read more...How to increase chances at my school13 WordsHigh SAT scores, extracurriculars...Read more...How to approach transferring schools27 WordsIf transferring from one school to another, having...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received36 WordsAlthough I did not use a private admissions counselor (I talked...Read more...Why I declined other schools37 WordsI declined other schools because they did not provide as generous...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school24 WordsAfter visiting USC, there was no turning...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics87 WordsWrite about things that are close to your heart. It may be your career goals, an interest or hobby, or a hardship you've experienced. Writing about...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college42 WordsVent to your peers. Enjoy time with your family. Spend time doing things...Read more...Misconceptions I had about college before attending62 WordsI mistakenly thought that the way I studied in high school would help me do well in college. WRONG!...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams74 WordsBefore registering and investing all the time needed to study for AP exams, makes sure that they are accepted for college credit...Read more...What I learned transitioning from high school to college72 WordsThe same study techniques that you relied on in high school (aka cramming) will not get you the same results in college....Read more...What I wish I had known as a first generation applicant89 WordsI didn't realize that college would be a balancing act for me: I had to work multiple jobs and take a full load of classes at the...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice66 WordsPLEASE apply to as many scholarships as you possibly can!!!!! That is something that I neglected to do. Although I...Read more...Why I recommend taking a gap year56 WordsTaking a gap year after college is so so necessary. Realistically speaking, most college students feel quite...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.39(equivalent to 3.90 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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