cyberzombies01,
Brown
B.S., Economics
Excited to be at Brown in the fall and excited to help out the next generation of college applicants!
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Advice
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Sports
Background
Hometown
Livingston, New Jersey
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2021
First Gen College StudentNo
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Mandarin, Spanish
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.S. in Economics
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement695 WordsChildhood memory, Creative personal story, Issue of personal significance, Place you’re content, Story central to identityI became a pastry chef at age eight. When I placed my strawberry mint tart into the oven, I could already imagine the final product. The sticky fruit filling would be sweet yet not too sweet, balanced by the correct amount of acidity. The buttery crust that enveloped the strawberries would be flaky and airy at the same time. What actually came out of the oven was inedible. The crust, if it could even be called that, was chewy and...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance891 WordsI was tired. Tired of sitting in the public library after school every day. Tired of reading articles about the next teenage superstar propelling himself or herself towards greatness, while I remained stationary. As I thought about the state of my life, head slumped forward on my fist, the fragrant scent of a Starbucks coffee roused me from my daze. Andrew was entering the library; I could smell him before I could see him. A cup of espresso clutched in...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement279 WordsMy earliest memory of second grade is one of unbelievable thirst, felt sitting alone near the front of the bus. School sapped me of moisture every day. After my third cup of water at home, I told mother of my discomfort in school. Courtesy of taking first grade in China, I could do my times tables faster than anyone else in class. But I wasn’t proud. Not at all. The other kids made fun of me after the Pledge...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other161 WordsIn one week, I mastered the art of the handshake. Boys State was cutthroat yet collaborative, tiring yet exhilarating. We listened to speeches from big names like Senator Robert Menendez and Senator Cory Booker. However, I found my inspiration not in these rallies but in a dark auditorium. Mayor of Springfield Ziad Shehady stood in front of our small group and stressed the importance of stepping forward and reaching out to as many people as possible. I grasped his lessons...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school114 WordsI spend weekends next to people who talk to walls. I’m not at a mental asylum. I’m at a forensics tournament, listening to speech competitors rehearse their pieces. The debaters sitting with me are faces that I see every weekend. Over time, we’ve built a community. From our hours of research on the issues, we come to different conclusions and don’t hesitate to share and change our opinions. I’m glad my stances on issues like...Read more...School Specific Advice
5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)5 WordsCreative, collaborative,...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture157 WordsInitially I wasn't as interested in Brown as I was in many of my other schools, but as I researched the school when I was writing supplements, I grew to like Brown more and more. Finally, I visited the school during admitted students day, and I loved...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to136 WordsFor me, finding schools was mostly a matter of major. I chose to apply to schools with good business or economics programs, because those were the subjects that I felt related most to my interests and my intended career. I...Read more...How to increase chances at my school60 WordsAt the admitted students day for Brown, the dean of admissions made note that even though everyone...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience79 WordsI think that the most important thing about interviews is to make them conversational, because that's what they are: conversations. Treat your interviewer like...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
My advice about getting recommenders116 WordsRecommendations are probably the most underrated aspect of the college admissions process. They offer another perspective on the student that can reveal a lot to admissions officers. So when you're looking for teachers to...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants127 WordsBased on personal experience, I've come to realize that the quality of your extracurricular activities matters a lot more than the quantity of your extracurricular activities; it is more worthwhile to involve yourself deeply with only a...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college134 WordsI know that it can seem intimidating when everyone else around you seems to be getting internships, research opportunities, etc. during the summer. You, however, should only be concerned with summer activities that are aligned with your passions; don't go...Read more...Post-college plans75 WordsSince a young age, I've looked up to figures like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs. I'm still fascinated by startups and entrepreneurship, but...Read more...What I’d change about my application process73 WordsUnlike a lot of friends, I got a relatively early start on my common app essay. However, I still procrastinated a lot...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.21RankTop 1%
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ActivitiesFuture Business Leaders of America (FBLA), Debate Club/Team, Key Club, Math Team, National Honor Society, School Band
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