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Brown University (Providence, RI)
Applied for a B.A. in History
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Personal Statement57 WordsCreative personal story, Love of outdoors, One moment that changed you, Overcoming personal struggle, Embarrassing mistake, Leaving home, Reaching a goalLast April, I spent four days in the woods of New England’s White Mountains, alone. Perhaps you have read essays about students discovering their connection with nature on wilderness solos. This is not one of those essays. It is about the time I stayed in a sleeping bag for 17 hours, trying to forget I was outside.Read more...Supplemental Essay Using a metaphor757 WordsMaybe it started when I read Laura Ingalls Wilder’s books about her journey as a young girl from Wisconsin to various settlements in the western territories. Or maybe it has been the result of my 13 years at a school that introduced rigorous education for young women at a time when every other option was a finishing school. Just maybe it was finding out that I share a birthday with Neil Armstrong. Whatever did it, I have always wanted to...Read more...Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote226 WordsFor as long as I can remember, I have been obsessed with Ancient Egypt. When I was little, I tied together two rocking chairs and a cardboard box, piled in all of my books on Egypt, and called it the Egyptmobile. A friend and I dressed as reincarnated pharaohs and queens, mummified our Barbies, and acted out our favorite myths. In middle school, my friend moved on, but I never did. Whenever I had a chance to expand the curriculum...Read more...Supplemental Essay Other100 WordsI choose topics that I hoped explained who I was in diverse ways, in order to turn the length of supplements into an asset rather than a burden. I also knew that my chosen common-app essay topic could quickly become clichéd and so I worked to make the prose creative and engaging. To this end, I asked my favorite english teacher to look it over. Her advice made the essay much stronger, and made me more confident than I...Read more...General Admissions Advice
List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience105 WordsI would highly recommend interviews, especially with small, liberal arts colleges. Almost without exception, I was accepted to the schools I interviewed with, and did less well with those I did not....Read more...How I chose schools to apply to52 WordsOnly apply to schools you would actually consider attending. I have friends who only got into...Read more...My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them35 WordsIn college, I joined the crew team, dj for the radio...Read more...Reaching out to professors and coaches at schools I applied to70 WordsI reached out to a professor in a department I was considering majoring in at the school I now attend, and...Read more...What I’d change about my application process43 WordsI wrote almost all of my applications between Christmas and New Years. While...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture133 WordsThe most incredible thing about Brown are the people here; teachers, students, even staff. Everybody is part of a tightly knit community. I regularly meet with my professors, and feel that they care about me, and make an effort to...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school5 WordsThe people...Read more...My favorite course thus far, and why113 WordsIt's hard to pick just one; I've loved different aspects of lots of classes. But the one class that really stands out is the course I took on Faulkner. What made it so special...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)15 WordsI think most Brown students...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college45 WordsI would try and do things during the summer that you care about and...Read more...Why I declined other schools96 WordsI was lucky enough to visit several schools I had gotten into. Those visits made some "no's" easy, if the culture just didn't feel right, or the programs didn't...Read more...High School Performance
GPA3.80(no specification of weighting)RankTop 10%
Academic Performance in High School Low one semester/year
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